for Florida Nights1/27/2012 c2 jaskolka
I enjoyed these two chapters so much. I really came to like Landon and all the sexual tension among the three friends. Oh, Carson probably has it bad for Landon... I would love to see you continue with this story one day.
I enjoyed these two chapters so much. I really came to like Landon and all the sexual tension among the three friends. Oh, Carson probably has it bad for Landon... I would love to see you continue with this story one day.
10/24/2010 c2 Taylor
Oops. I did not know that there were other chapters to this story... um, you could ignore half of my other comment about more of this story because you already did. *nervous laugh* Well... you still have my support! WOOT! ^-^
Oops. I did not know that there were other chapters to this story... um, you could ignore half of my other comment about more of this story because you already did. *nervous laugh* Well... you still have my support! WOOT! ^-^
10/24/2010 c1 Taylor
YEAH! Finish that!... please. And *trumpet plays* Error Report! I think that there is another my head that shouldn't be there: "I turned my head my head to get a look at the man when the hand that was covering my mouth shot up and to cover my eyes." Plus I liked it too, it really should be finished. ^-^ You have my support!
YEAH! Finish that!... please. And *trumpet plays* Error Report! I think that there is another my head that shouldn't be there: "I turned my head my head to get a look at the man when the hand that was covering my mouth shot up and to cover my eyes." Plus I liked it too, it really should be finished. ^-^ You have my support!
7/28/2010 c3 
3runswithvamp
no please update? please please please? i love this story. plus u dont update claws that bind me often either.oh please?
3runswithvampno please update? please please please? i love this story. plus u dont update claws that bind me often either.oh please?
3/21/2010 c1 Me.Want.Eat.You
Ohmygoshh, i think this is my favourite story on FP. :D The plot is great and it's written really well(: Pleasee update son! :3
Ohmygoshh, i think this is my favourite story on FP. :D The plot is great and it's written really well(: Pleasee update son! :3
12/24/2009 c2 9Lerene
I like it. Is Carson the mysterious guy? I think it is. It makes sense given how mad he is.
9LereneI like it. Is Carson the mysterious guy? I think it is. It makes sense given how mad he is.
12/17/2009 c2 miraakira
ok ok u need to update soon ii mean soon this is awesome! at first i thought that carson was the one to have sex with him but i guess i was wrong. can't wait to see what happens next.
ok ok u need to update soon ii mean soon this is awesome! at first i thought that carson was the one to have sex with him but i guess i was wrong. can't wait to see what happens next.
11/7/2009 c2 Round About Parker
I really like this so far- very dramatic, without being too over the top. Can't wait to read more!
I really like this so far- very dramatic, without being too over the top. Can't wait to read more!
11/5/2009 c2 25Esquirella
What do I think? I think I need to see chapter 3 and SOON! What will Landon do now?
25EsquirellaWhat do I think? I think I need to see chapter 3 and SOON! What will Landon do now?
11/4/2009 c2 3runswithvamp
wow landon totally blew his cover. i would have said "of course i said that! he and a chick were in my room! plus how could you possibly heard that with all the loud music?" also if he said that carson wouldn't be able to respond because it would blow his cover
3runswithvampwow landon totally blew his cover. i would have said "of course i said that! he and a chick were in my room! plus how could you possibly heard that with all the loud music?" also if he said that carson wouldn't be able to respond because it would blow his cover
7/31/2009 c1 runswithvamp
please please continue. i want to read about john try and figure out why landon cant look at him in the eye.thats going to be funny. please continue
please please continue. i want to read about john try and figure out why landon cant look at him in the eye.thats going to be funny. please continue
7/20/2009 c1 1Mercedes Woods
I really like the characters and the setting. The beginning of this was a great start, it really set the story up well. I was a little disappointed by how rushed it felt, though, and that more emphasis was put on the sex instead of developing the characters a little more first. The end also turned into more of a cliche with the line, "Well shit... I guess I'm gay... and like one of my best friends. My very straight best friend." If it'd been developed more first instead of just jumping right to the sex, then I think that cliche would've worked. As it is, though, I don't think it works as well. I'd really like to see a revised version of this, though, because like I said the beginning really sets the readers up for a great story.
1Mercedes WoodsI really like the characters and the setting. The beginning of this was a great start, it really set the story up well. I was a little disappointed by how rushed it felt, though, and that more emphasis was put on the sex instead of developing the characters a little more first. The end also turned into more of a cliche with the line, "Well shit... I guess I'm gay... and like one of my best friends. My very straight best friend." If it'd been developed more first instead of just jumping right to the sex, then I think that cliche would've worked. As it is, though, I don't think it works as well. I'd really like to see a revised version of this, though, because like I said the beginning really sets the readers up for a great story.