for Images of a Beautiful Summer8/10/2010 c1 
12TorgoTheWhite
Great bit of writing exercise. It saddens me a bit since the Summer Break is going to end for me soon and I didn't really enjoy it that much since I've been working all summer. You should definitely keep on writing if you've got time!
12TorgoTheWhiteGreat bit of writing exercise. It saddens me a bit since the Summer Break is going to end for me soon and I didn't really enjoy it that much since I've been working all summer. You should definitely keep on writing if you've got time!
6/16/2009 c1 MonPon
This is so cute! I love the idea of the story=D You should continue it or something, like, make a bunch of sequels. . ♥
This is so cute! I love the idea of the story=D You should continue it or something, like, make a bunch of sequels. . ♥
6/8/2009 c1 12Imminent Paradox
Ooh, I really like this!
You've got wonderful descriptions- it's almost like I'm right there, watching the boy do everything he does.
Along with the imagery, I also love the metaphors/similes.
Great job :). This deserves I thumbs up!
12Imminent ParadoxOoh, I really like this!
You've got wonderful descriptions- it's almost like I'm right there, watching the boy do everything he does.
Along with the imagery, I also love the metaphors/similes.
Great job :). This deserves I thumbs up!