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9/6/2012 c35 jurjid
This was very interesting. The conflicts were very well done, and the time travel seemed to be used to expand the story, not provide filler plot.

The only thing that could be improved was that the future people's actions were unexplained. By this I mean: Why did Molly accept the treatment when she knew it would turn her into a monster? Why did they leave subtle clues instead of the tools and instructions directly? You are of course in charge of the story, but a few more chapters would help.
9/11/2009 c24 4Vincentjr
Thanks for updating so much!

I was so worried when I didn't see your story on the update list for a while...and I was scared that you had ditched the story. This was the first story that captured my interest on Fpress, and I've loved it so much. It enraptured me from the very start, but I haven't had time to review...

This is such an intriguing idea, and the way you're letting it play out is really fantastic. The thoughts and actions are described masterfully, and I would recommend this story to anyone! It's easy to follow, and the mystery surrounding the house is created really well. I don't want you to wrap up the story quickly, but I want to know! ARGH! The tension is just so hard to bear...but I will! ^^

Thankyou so much for this story. Keep going forward! (or backward, if that's how your time works xDD)
7/28/2009 c19 enaid
haha i love professor coolidge. her matter of fact way. it's great.

I hope that nothing goes terribly wrong for the four inside and poor lucinda missing her mommy. I'm glad that you added that in there though because her actions don't always make her seem like a kid. I am very intrigued and can't wait to see what other rooms in the house open up next.
7/16/2009 c15 enaid
i love you and your fast updates I am so incredibly enthralled by this story. keep up the amazing work.
7/13/2009 c2 Strawdygrl
One quick question: The genre for this is Fantasy and Friendship, but Alfred and Madge seem...a bit fond of each other. Are they? Although...this is the prologue, I guess I should read on...I really do like this. Did you win at all during NaNoWriMo?
7/13/2009 c1 Strawdygrl
This is good. I usually don't get into Sci-Fi stuff. I'm more into major Fantasy, Lord of The Rings type stuff, and this surprised me. I like this so far. And Madgelie is a lovely name. Good job with this! I will most definitely continue reading!
7/12/2009 c1 enaid
i am so incredibly glad that you are back and writing again. sorry its taken me so long to review. anyway i really like how you there are almost two separate stories within this story going on. hope we get to read more about alfred and madge soon. I also love how you began the story with the inventions that created the hour house which takes a new generation to fix. can't wait until the next update.
6/23/2009 c5 1Heart of Silver
Wow, the story is now starting to get REALLY interesting! Come on people, REVIEW! This is too good of a story to pass up! Anyways, update as soon as you can.
6/4/2009 c2 Heart of Silver
Wow! So far, this story is awesome! I LOVE IT! PLEASE update soon! Is it already finished?

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