for Save Me6/17/2010 c1 
23angrylove888
This is shorter than the other poems I have read of yours so far, but it's simplistic structure somehow makes it all-the-more sweeter. Very nice.
~angry
23angrylove888This is shorter than the other poems I have read of yours so far, but it's simplistic structure somehow makes it all-the-more sweeter. Very nice.
~angry
9/2/2009 c1 70Guy1122
I love these short lines. I love the emotion that they convey.
I think that you are a good writer.
I like your work.
Good job.
~Guy
70Guy1122I love these short lines. I love the emotion that they convey.
I think that you are a good writer.
I like your work.
Good job.
~Guy
8/9/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
The topic isn't my favorite. It's incredibly overdone, and there weren't partiularly any images that made this stand out in my mind.
I do like the circularity of this, though. It makes it feel like a cycle that you can't break and will never be free of.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
2dragonflydreamerThe topic isn't my favorite. It's incredibly overdone, and there weren't partiularly any images that made this stand out in my mind.
I do like the circularity of this, though. It makes it feel like a cycle that you can't break and will never be free of.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
6/10/2009 c1 81BedHead-RedHead
I like it! A little short, but thats ok.
"I'm slipping, sinking, falling" Enough to make my stomach drop! Love those lines. Nice job!
81BedHead-RedHeadI like it! A little short, but thats ok.
"I'm slipping, sinking, falling" Enough to make my stomach drop! Love those lines. Nice job!
6/4/2009 c1 166listen to what i've never said
I don't even have to say how great this is. Everyone better know it or they have half a brain :P
Great piece and I love it ♥
166listen to what i've never saidI don't even have to say how great this is. Everyone better know it or they have half a brain :P
Great piece and I love it ♥
6/4/2009 c1 19The Beautiful Letdown
maybe your knight in shining armor is just a boy wrapped in tin foil. and i don't think he's the only one who can save you. i mean, look up! remember, "don't tell God how big your storm is, tell the storm how big your GOD is." he can handle it.
19The Beautiful Letdownmaybe your knight in shining armor is just a boy wrapped in tin foil. and i don't think he's the only one who can save you. i mean, look up! remember, "don't tell God how big your storm is, tell the storm how big your GOD is." he can handle it.
6/4/2009 c1 16maple the wacky tree
yes, knights in shining armor can be a pain sometimes. i hate it when all the wrong knights are the ones who are attempting to save you.
beautiful poem. the way you placed save me at the beginning and the end made a nice little loop, and it made my eyes continue to read it more than once. nice job! ^^
16maple the wacky treeyes, knights in shining armor can be a pain sometimes. i hate it when all the wrong knights are the ones who are attempting to save you.
beautiful poem. the way you placed save me at the beginning and the end made a nice little loop, and it made my eyes continue to read it more than once. nice job! ^^