for Unbound Sunset12/23/2012 c6 oninoshirosaki
Ame-chan! This is really fascinating! I've never read anything about wolves before. I like how the story is playing out. It's really interesting - the wolf-like behavior mingled with human traits. I don't know how you do that, it seems really hard! *can't write animals* I like Keagan - he seems like an interesting and somewhat complicated character.
I could relate to Kuroji especially in Chapter Four - his mistrust and loneliness. And I really liked the part when Keagan was treating his wounds and warned Kuroji it would hurt, and Kuroji thought, It already does. I know these are your original characters, but that line felt very in character somehow. Haha. I guess I'm not making any sense.
This is set in America? I assumed it was Japan, at first. haha.
The last line was funny. Overall, it's a nice blend of sweet and angst and what looks like some promising action/adventure.
I'm looking forward to more of this story (and your novels). Good work, Ame-chan! :)
Ame-chan! This is really fascinating! I've never read anything about wolves before. I like how the story is playing out. It's really interesting - the wolf-like behavior mingled with human traits. I don't know how you do that, it seems really hard! *can't write animals* I like Keagan - he seems like an interesting and somewhat complicated character.
I could relate to Kuroji especially in Chapter Four - his mistrust and loneliness. And I really liked the part when Keagan was treating his wounds and warned Kuroji it would hurt, and Kuroji thought, It already does. I know these are your original characters, but that line felt very in character somehow. Haha. I guess I'm not making any sense.
This is set in America? I assumed it was Japan, at first. haha.
The last line was funny. Overall, it's a nice blend of sweet and angst and what looks like some promising action/adventure.
I'm looking forward to more of this story (and your novels). Good work, Ame-chan! :)
9/4/2012 c6 
4purple-wolf-howl
please update soon! I like the story so far. It's plot is interesting though I wish you included more of Kuroji's past in the previous chapters. but, all in all, an interesting story and plot.
4purple-wolf-howlplease update soon! I like the story so far. It's plot is interesting though I wish you included more of Kuroji's past in the previous chapters. but, all in all, an interesting story and plot.
5/4/2011 c6 Celestialuna
I'm surprised that this story doesn't have more reviews, I've noticed that on this website. It's so unlike .
It's a good story, I wish you'd continue.
I'm surprised that this story doesn't have more reviews, I've noticed that on this website. It's so unlike .
It's a good story, I wish you'd continue.
8/1/2009 c3 green.at.9
Ahh, need to read more! Great work and please update soon!
Ahh, need to read more! Great work and please update soon!