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113403 Forbidden
This is beautifully written, I love it. The rhyming feels natural and the words all seem to fit. The feeling in this is vividly expressed. I like that you didn't punctuate; it doesn't need it.
~403F
113403 ForbiddenThis is beautifully written, I love it. The rhyming feels natural and the words all seem to fit. The feeling in this is vividly expressed. I like that you didn't punctuate; it doesn't need it.
~403F