
7/12/2009 c3
4HighOnBrokenWings
I really liked it! Why havent you got more attention on this? 'Cause I thought that it was really well written. Yeah, it was kind of abrupt (Not spelt right, but hey, we cant all be perfect) and stuff. I really liked it :) I hope you continue writing this, because it would be a shame if you didnt :D

I really liked it! Why havent you got more attention on this? 'Cause I thought that it was really well written. Yeah, it was kind of abrupt (Not spelt right, but hey, we cant all be perfect) and stuff. I really liked it :) I hope you continue writing this, because it would be a shame if you didnt :D
7/12/2009 c2 HighOnBrokenWings
Another good addition. I actually kind of like the fact that youve spaced these two out...
Another good addition. I actually kind of like the fact that youve spaced these two out...
7/12/2009 c1 HighOnBrokenWings
Thats a really good pulling in kind of prologue, although I would have just put it as the begin of the first chapter :P All the same, I really liked it :D
Thats a really good pulling in kind of prologue, although I would have just put it as the begin of the first chapter :P All the same, I really liked it :D