for Memories6/7/2009 c1 
5Said Author
"A promise so scared"...do you mean "sacred"? Anyway, this is nice but I don't like the way you structured it. I think you need to space the paragraph away from the title.
Keep it up!
5Said Author"A promise so scared"...do you mean "sacred"? Anyway, this is nice but I don't like the way you structured it. I think you need to space the paragraph away from the title.
Keep it up!