for The Legend2/20/2010 c11 complications
I Thought so! YAY! Very well thought out story.
I Thought so! YAY! Very well thought out story.
11/29/2009 c20 
1Jinxed Rogue
Even though this was one of the more rare past life coming back to haunt the present life cliches, you took it and put your own spin on things. You had an actual plot and took the time to develop it and your characters. Good work.
1Jinxed RogueEven though this was one of the more rare past life coming back to haunt the present life cliches, you took it and put your own spin on things. You had an actual plot and took the time to develop it and your characters. Good work.
7/20/2009 c20 xMunchy
Okay, I know how I said your previous works (every single one of them) were good, but this completely had me hypnotized. One of a kind... or as far as my knowledge extends, which isn't very far, by the way. Anyway, still love your stories!
Okay, I know how I said your previous works (every single one of them) were good, but this completely had me hypnotized. One of a kind... or as far as my knowledge extends, which isn't very far, by the way. Anyway, still love your stories!
7/7/2009 c20 benzene
Pretty original. Although toward the end, I got kinda sick with people pretending to not be who they were i.e. Luna or her lover. Grammar was okay from my standpoint.
Pretty original. Although toward the end, I got kinda sick with people pretending to not be who they were i.e. Luna or her lover. Grammar was okay from my standpoint.
7/6/2009 c20 5Arya Yamamoto
Its a beautiful story... simply lovely! Thanks for writing it. =)
A thousand years of love, now that's really impressive! XD
5Arya YamamotoIts a beautiful story... simply lovely! Thanks for writing it. =)
A thousand years of love, now that's really impressive! XD
7/4/2009 c20 reader
Beautiful story- engaging, unique, startling! I loved it so much...thank you! There were a lot of surprising twists plus the ends of chapters were always _so_ good! Always a nail-biter...thank goodness I found this story completed already! Thanks so much for posting it...this is a work of creative genius, and I am SOO glad the ending is so wonderfully happy (other than Gordon I guess...which was a nice realistic touch I guess). Your story wasn't totally unbelievable because it did take into account some casualties. It is impressive that you drew in many different ideas...more modern storylines like Chris and Westley's relationship as well as ancient myth and an impressive range of fantasy. I would like to know more about Bud...his existence and abilities are a brilliant addition to the story obviously, but more character development there could make him seem less like a tool for the story and more like a real person. I doubt that two brothers can snap back into a pretty normal relationship after so many years of no communication whatsoever. Anyway, totally brilliant... :) :)
Beautiful story- engaging, unique, startling! I loved it so much...thank you! There were a lot of surprising twists plus the ends of chapters were always _so_ good! Always a nail-biter...thank goodness I found this story completed already! Thanks so much for posting it...this is a work of creative genius, and I am SOO glad the ending is so wonderfully happy (other than Gordon I guess...which was a nice realistic touch I guess). Your story wasn't totally unbelievable because it did take into account some casualties. It is impressive that you drew in many different ideas...more modern storylines like Chris and Westley's relationship as well as ancient myth and an impressive range of fantasy. I would like to know more about Bud...his existence and abilities are a brilliant addition to the story obviously, but more character development there could make him seem less like a tool for the story and more like a real person. I doubt that two brothers can snap back into a pretty normal relationship after so many years of no communication whatsoever. Anyway, totally brilliant... :) :)
6/29/2009 c20 5incognitus
Wow I can't believe it's over. And Mike and Annie and Bill all got their happy ending. =) The ending scene was a little cheesy, but overall it was a nice enjoyable story. Nice job, and looking forward to reading your next story!
5incognitusWow I can't believe it's over. And Mike and Annie and Bill all got their happy ending. =) The ending scene was a little cheesy, but overall it was a nice enjoyable story. Nice job, and looking forward to reading your next story!
6/27/2009 c20 cant think of a good name yet
that was a good story, I would like to know more about the dragon folks in that world, but maybe its good that you dont, you cant have soul mates / soul bonding in every story supernatural story that you write in that world, it would get repetitive a bit.
so far i like most most of your stories, and with each new story you write i can tell that you have improved a bit more, i hope you keep it up. i cant wait til the next story you right comes up.
that was a good story, I would like to know more about the dragon folks in that world, but maybe its good that you dont, you cant have soul mates / soul bonding in every story supernatural story that you write in that world, it would get repetitive a bit.
so far i like most most of your stories, and with each new story you write i can tell that you have improved a bit more, i hope you keep it up. i cant wait til the next story you right comes up.
6/26/2009 c20 chng234
a sweet epilogue. i like your work. pls keep writing. hope to see your new work soon
a sweet epilogue. i like your work. pls keep writing. hope to see your new work soon
6/25/2009 c19 Evanescent.Sight
Aw that was so sad i didnt want her to have to say goodbye to Bill. Good riddance to the other guy, forgot his name :D
Aw that was so sad i didnt want her to have to say goodbye to Bill. Good riddance to the other guy, forgot his name :D
6/23/2009 c17 96Silly Little Storywriter
Will Bill get to see Luna again?
Will Mike and Annie finally admit their feelings verbally?
What will happen to Hadrian?
I'm sure you're going to wrap these up in the next chapter, but I'm impatient - Dammit!
Great story, all the way through :D
Brenna
96Silly Little StorywriterWill Bill get to see Luna again?
Will Mike and Annie finally admit their feelings verbally?
What will happen to Hadrian?
I'm sure you're going to wrap these up in the next chapter, but I'm impatient - Dammit!
Great story, all the way through :D
Brenna
6/23/2009 c16 chng234
i hope chris n westley r not dead. since bud n mike have special powers, i wonder does their sister have or not.
i hope chris n westley r not dead. since bud n mike have special powers, i wonder does their sister have or not.