for The Legend6/21/2009 c15 
96Silly Little Storywriter
Oh! I can't wait to see what'll happen. I hope Anne or Mike smash Hadrian's face in. Or Luna like... lands on him or something. I dunno.
Could Anne look a bit like Luna because she was changed by the First?
How much longer is there to go? I hate suspense!
Brenna
96Silly Little StorywriterOh! I can't wait to see what'll happen. I hope Anne or Mike smash Hadrian's face in. Or Luna like... lands on him or something. I dunno.
Could Anne look a bit like Luna because she was changed by the First?
How much longer is there to go? I hate suspense!
Brenna
6/21/2009 c14 chng234
has hariden lost his mind? it seems to me that he does not recognise or know what he is doing. i hope mike, westley n chris will save anne
has hariden lost his mind? it seems to me that he does not recognise or know what he is doing. i hope mike, westley n chris will save anne
6/19/2009 c13 Silly Little Storywriter
Sorry I didn't review the last couple of chapters, but I had a mega exam.
I must say, that sometimes your characters in your stories are unbearably stubborn and oblivious. They refuse to see what's right in front of them! I know that a lot of people are like that but all I keep thinking is "you just married the chick, it's okay to be in love with her!"
Hahahaha. That's not a criticism though. Things have to be written the way they are most of the time.
I'm on holiday now so I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next cchapter!
Brenna
Sorry I didn't review the last couple of chapters, but I had a mega exam.
I must say, that sometimes your characters in your stories are unbearably stubborn and oblivious. They refuse to see what's right in front of them! I know that a lot of people are like that but all I keep thinking is "you just married the chick, it's okay to be in love with her!"
Hahahaha. That's not a criticism though. Things have to be written the way they are most of the time.
I'm on holiday now so I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next cchapter!
Brenna
6/18/2009 c12 chng234
i hope luna is still alive... is there a chance that anne is bill n luna's daughter?
i hope luna is still alive... is there a chance that anne is bill n luna's daughter?
6/17/2009 c11 11Whispers of the Lost
woah! that was totally unexpected! I seriously would have never seen that coming! great chapter =)
11Whispers of the Lostwoah! that was totally unexpected! I seriously would have never seen that coming! great chapter =)
6/17/2009 c11 chng234
i m in shock! all along i was thinking that mike is the first werewolf n anne is luna... but it turns out that bill is the first werewolf! where n who is luna?
i m in shock! all along i was thinking that mike is the first werewolf n anne is luna... but it turns out that bill is the first werewolf! where n who is luna?
6/16/2009 c10 Whispers of the Lost
Great chapter! I was glad to finally meet some of Mike's family!
Where were Chris and Westley during the whole wedding ordeal?
oh and are Mike and Anne going to live with the pack?
Great chapter! I was glad to finally meet some of Mike's family!
Where were Chris and Westley during the whole wedding ordeal?
oh and are Mike and Anne going to live with the pack?
6/16/2009 c10 96Silly Little Storywriter
Aw! I'm glad it cheered you up! It sucks when you think that people aren't reading your stuff. Usually they're just too lazy to review. I must admit I have read all your other stories and not reviewed, which isn't good.
Anyway, loved the chapter.
Oh! That's one thing I wanted to ask. How do a couple bond?
That's all.
Have a good day!
Bren
96Silly Little StorywriterAw! I'm glad it cheered you up! It sucks when you think that people aren't reading your stuff. Usually they're just too lazy to review. I must admit I have read all your other stories and not reviewed, which isn't good.
Anyway, loved the chapter.
Oh! That's one thing I wanted to ask. How do a couple bond?
That's all.
Have a good day!
Bren
6/15/2009 c9 chng234
does anne like mike? jus wonder why bill is unhappy? maube he knows the truth between mike n anne
does anne like mike? jus wonder why bill is unhappy? maube he knows the truth between mike n anne
6/15/2009 c9 Silly Little Storywriter
Your supernatural stories don't get as many reviews as they deserve. Instead the cliched ones get all the reviews. It's not really fair. Your stories are more original than half the crap you can find at a book store.
You've got my loyalty.
Bren
Your supernatural stories don't get as many reviews as they deserve. Instead the cliched ones get all the reviews. It's not really fair. Your stories are more original than half the crap you can find at a book store.
You've got my loyalty.
Bren