for Angel of Mine9/19/2012 c1 
2Draconian Phoenix
very vivid. I especially like the description of the darkness at the beginning.
2Draconian Phoenixvery vivid. I especially like the description of the darkness at the beginning.
3/15/2012 c1 4The Phoenix Girl
*wipe a tear*
So sad but true... I believe that when you lose someone you love he/she turns into your guardian angel!
Loved it and great work :)
4The Phoenix Girl*wipe a tear*
So sad but true... I believe that when you lose someone you love he/she turns into your guardian angel!
Loved it and great work :)
3/15/2012 c1 The Phoenix Girl
*wipe a tear*
So sad but true... I believe that when you lose someone you love he/she turns into your guardian angel!
Loved it and great work :)
*wipe a tear*
So sad but true... I believe that when you lose someone you love he/she turns into your guardian angel!
Loved it and great work :)
10/24/2010 c1 6A Kiss in the Dreamhouse
For some reason, I found this opening very endearing. Her dead mum comes back as her guardian angel. That's really nice! Looking forward to an update!
6A Kiss in the DreamhouseFor some reason, I found this opening very endearing. Her dead mum comes back as her guardian angel. That's really nice! Looking forward to an update!
12/22/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
AHH!
That was so amazingly good!
Wow! You use such civilised, thought out similies and metaphors and all that junk.
It was so unbelieveably real. The imagery was perfect, and the character seemed lost from the start.
Wow. That was great :D
4HighOnBrokenWingsAHH!
That was so amazingly good!
Wow! You use such civilised, thought out similies and metaphors and all that junk.
It was so unbelieveably real. The imagery was perfect, and the character seemed lost from the start.
Wow. That was great :D
9/25/2009 c1 1Selenion
This is beautiful! I loved the way it sounds. Oh please, write more! Write More!
1SelenionThis is beautiful! I loved the way it sounds. Oh please, write more! Write More!
6/7/2009 c1 9WinMyHeart5444
Hello! So this is absolutely amazing! I am in love with it. The way you use description is so good, and the words you used in the chapter were deep. I loved the flash back, the cliff hanger ending, the way you described the "star." All in all, it was perfect! I cannot wait to read more!
9WinMyHeart5444Hello! So this is absolutely amazing! I am in love with it. The way you use description is so good, and the words you used in the chapter were deep. I loved the flash back, the cliff hanger ending, the way you described the "star." All in all, it was perfect! I cannot wait to read more!