for Flaming in the Dorms4/27/2015 c36 schnecky55
Hi
the story is really very good. I read the whole night. Cant wait to know how things with steven ends.
Hi
the story is really very good. I read the whole night. Cant wait to know how things with steven ends.
3/22/2015 c1 Daniel.Stone127
A bit of an overuse of exclamation points. Dialog is also a little weak in points. Other than that, though, pretty good :)
A bit of an overuse of exclamation points. Dialog is also a little weak in points. Other than that, though, pretty good :)
10/14/2014 c13 Jeanette hansen
right... half way review:
damn it's a good story... all the drama and love and damn all the drama... and let's not forget the smexing;)
but J H Christ all the F words are seriously starting to get on my nerves... not that F words are a no go for me or offending (if they were I wouldn't be reading this), not at all... they are just freaking annoying when they appear in every freaking sentence... at least twice... just though I'd let you know...
excitedly onwards to the next chapter :D
right... half way review:
damn it's a good story... all the drama and love and damn all the drama... and let's not forget the smexing;)
but J H Christ all the F words are seriously starting to get on my nerves... not that F words are a no go for me or offending (if they were I wouldn't be reading this), not at all... they are just freaking annoying when they appear in every freaking sentence... at least twice... just though I'd let you know...
excitedly onwards to the next chapter :D
3/29/2014 c36 Makaylee
Hi. Are you goning to update this? I'm hooked on the story so if you would that'd be great.I absolutely love Damien. Thanks.
Hi. Are you goning to update this? I'm hooked on the story so if you would that'd be great.I absolutely love Damien. Thanks.
11/5/2013 c36 Guest
more!
damn you for getting me addicted to this.
more!
damn you for getting me addicted to this.
11/5/2013 c35 Guest
I want Ryan and James to get together!
I want Ryan and James to get together!
11/2/2013 c19 Sara
just to let you know. I FUCKING NEW something was up with Granny and Mary on the day Scott and Dae arrived and they were having lunch.
but it still surprised and cracked me up though.
just to let you know. I FUCKING NEW something was up with Granny and Mary on the day Scott and Dae arrived and they were having lunch.
but it still surprised and cracked me up though.
11/1/2013 c15 Sara
H.O.L.Y F.U.C.K.!.
ahahhahahha
oh man, i freakin' LOVE Damien!
you're amazing you know that? i can't stop reading this. I've got exams in a week and instead i'm reading this at 2 in the fucking morning!
bro, you got me addicted to this.
H.O.L.Y F.U.C.K.!.
ahahhahahha
oh man, i freakin' LOVE Damien!
you're amazing you know that? i can't stop reading this. I've got exams in a week and instead i'm reading this at 2 in the fucking morning!
bro, you got me addicted to this.
9/18/2013 c36 
2book-geek
Hey! So I realize you havdnt updated this story in years, and don't know if you even use this anymore, but just wanted to say that this story was really great and its a shame you never finished it. I just finished rereading it and although there are a few grammar errors the plot and characters are just perfect (not to mention the sex scenes were hot as fuckk)
Anyway just thought I'd let you know (: haha
book-geek
2book-geekHey! So I realize you havdnt updated this story in years, and don't know if you even use this anymore, but just wanted to say that this story was really great and its a shame you never finished it. I just finished rereading it and although there are a few grammar errors the plot and characters are just perfect (not to mention the sex scenes were hot as fuckk)
Anyway just thought I'd let you know (: haha
book-geek
4/5/2013 c36 3morningstorm70
OMG you have got to continue you cannot leave it hanging like that
Please say you are not dropping the story pleeeese.
3morningstorm70OMG you have got to continue you cannot leave it hanging like that
Please say you are not dropping the story pleeeese.
4/1/2013 c9 Guest
I really like the story so far, but in this chapter you once named Charles "Prewitt" and once "Prescott"...
I really like the story so far, but in this chapter you once named Charles "Prewitt" and once "Prescott"...
2/17/2013 c36 1Boo52
More please! I'm hooked! Can't wait for Scott to wake up and realize who Steven really is!
1Boo52More please! I'm hooked! Can't wait for Scott to wake up and realize who Steven really is!
12/2/2012 c36 sweetlevy
Love your stories and am dying to know what's gonna happen with Damien and Scott, please update soon :-)
Love your stories and am dying to know what's gonna happen with Damien and Scott, please update soon :-)