for Beautiful Nightmare1/27/2010 c1 natmarie
Great description and imagery. I really got into this piece and where the narrator was coming from. Keep writing :) This would even, potentially, make a good prologue to a bigger story. Of course it is good as is as well.
Great description and imagery. I really got into this piece and where the narrator was coming from. Keep writing :) This would even, potentially, make a good prologue to a bigger story. Of course it is good as is as well.
8/21/2009 c1 
2DarkGirlX
Hi. :) I just seen your story and thought it looked interesting so I felt I should review it. First of all, I love the title. It made me want to see what it was all about. I had no idea until the end that she was truly dreaming. Very well done. Grammer and puncuation were spot on, which is always a big thing to me.
I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. Good job!
~DarkGirlX~
2DarkGirlXHi. :) I just seen your story and thought it looked interesting so I felt I should review it. First of all, I love the title. It made me want to see what it was all about. I had no idea until the end that she was truly dreaming. Very well done. Grammer and puncuation were spot on, which is always a big thing to me.
I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. Good job!
~DarkGirlX~