for A Flash of Gold8/7/2011 c1 Kalilah
Wow, I never really thought a one shot could ever have me in tears. Well you proved me wrong by a long shot. I was bawling my eyes out, tears falling one after the other. XD This was really good; really, really good.
Wow, I never really thought a one shot could ever have me in tears. Well you proved me wrong by a long shot. I was bawling my eyes out, tears falling one after the other. XD This was really good; really, really good.
8/20/2010 c1 
22dear-llama
Beautiful! This made me cry. I love how the characters and their emotions are so realistically portrayed.
22dear-llamaBeautiful! This made me cry. I love how the characters and their emotions are so realistically portrayed.
1/4/2010 c1 Chocorange888
A piece of really good writing on human relationships and marriage. I think it's something that everyone fears in a marriage (my mum's certainly confessed it enough times to me when I was old enough), and I think the way that you portrayed the characters is amazing. Thank you.
A piece of really good writing on human relationships and marriage. I think it's something that everyone fears in a marriage (my mum's certainly confessed it enough times to me when I was old enough), and I think the way that you portrayed the characters is amazing. Thank you.
12/9/2009 c1 14Beautiful Destination
I love this! It's beautifully written, and the emotions so raw and realistic. Perhaps many marriages could have been saved if the couple had this sort of conversation. Great job!
14Beautiful DestinationI love this! It's beautifully written, and the emotions so raw and realistic. Perhaps many marriages could have been saved if the couple had this sort of conversation. Great job!
10/31/2009 c1 Laura Schiller
Beautiful, and at the same time very realistic. Great details - his hair, the various kisses, their problems.
Beautiful, and at the same time very realistic. Great details - his hair, the various kisses, their problems.
7/8/2009 c1 fairy Eva
Talk about warm-fuzzies at the end. Holy fack, this was fantastic. Seriously, it was just the right amount of angst, anger, forgiveness and hope rolled into one tidy one-shot. And my goodness that sounded corny right there, but it's true. Thanks for a great read!
Talk about warm-fuzzies at the end. Holy fack, this was fantastic. Seriously, it was just the right amount of angst, anger, forgiveness and hope rolled into one tidy one-shot. And my goodness that sounded corny right there, but it's true. Thanks for a great read!
6/21/2009 c1 doodledot
This was a really well written story. i was immediately pulled in and was tense until the last line, worried that they might divorce or something! it was very griping, yet sweet too, the writing was really engaging and their conversation about each other soo sweet! i felt like awwing through it all! please keep them coming!
This was a really well written story. i was immediately pulled in and was tense until the last line, worried that they might divorce or something! it was very griping, yet sweet too, the writing was really engaging and their conversation about each other soo sweet! i felt like awwing through it all! please keep them coming!
6/8/2009 c1 14its.Nothing.Special
I really wish I had the words to describe how much I loved this, but oh, words are so imperfect. Really. This was more raw than anything I've read in a while, and so completely gorgeous and frustrating and hopeful and hurt and pure AND! I'm officially in love with the just-in button.
;)becky
14its.Nothing.SpecialI really wish I had the words to describe how much I loved this, but oh, words are so imperfect. Really. This was more raw than anything I've read in a while, and so completely gorgeous and frustrating and hopeful and hurt and pure AND! I'm officially in love with the just-in button.
;)becky
6/8/2009 c1 Aranel Abeille
What a sweet, beautiful, insightful story. You really show the way that even two people who love each other deeply can just miss each other so many times, and the consequences if it's allowed to build up. But then- oh!- you show how it's possible to be reconciled, to rediscover themselves and come out with a richer, deeper relationship.
What a sweet, beautiful, insightful story. You really show the way that even two people who love each other deeply can just miss each other so many times, and the consequences if it's allowed to build up. But then- oh!- you show how it's possible to be reconciled, to rediscover themselves and come out with a richer, deeper relationship.