
2/25/2010 c1
25Kyllex
Aww. That's really, really sad. I can't imagine what that would even be like...it's just really horrible. But at least the baby will be able to grow up knowing that his dad died a hero.
Anyway, this was good. I liked it. (:

Aww. That's really, really sad. I can't imagine what that would even be like...it's just really horrible. But at least the baby will be able to grow up knowing that his dad died a hero.
Anyway, this was good. I liked it. (:
9/1/2009 c1
10CassandraStacy
This is really good. I love the characterization in this story, but what particularly compels me is the end. I feel like there could be so much more divulged in this story. Particularly the growing relationship between her and her best friend as he helps to bring her from her grief. I'd love to see more! But that's just my cliched side talking, heh. (I love my cliched side very much.)
Cassandra

This is really good. I love the characterization in this story, but what particularly compels me is the end. I feel like there could be so much more divulged in this story. Particularly the growing relationship between her and her best friend as he helps to bring her from her grief. I'd love to see more! But that's just my cliched side talking, heh. (I love my cliched side very much.)
Cassandra
8/25/2009 c1
5Somedaymydreamswillcome
Man, that was incredibly intense. And I love the storyline. Such a great story wrapped in such a tiny package, but not lacking in the least! Perfect. :D

Man, that was incredibly intense. And I love the storyline. Such a great story wrapped in such a tiny package, but not lacking in the least! Perfect. :D
7/2/2009 c1
11Jessiquie
Wow... this is beautiful.
Just going through old emails and came across this story via SKOW and I'm so glad I did.
Your expression and decriptions are so detailed and moving and the whole situation is both heartbreaking and beautiful. Its short, but its impact is amazing I can't believe you haven't got more reviews. I loved this.

Wow... this is beautiful.
Just going through old emails and came across this story via SKOW and I'm so glad I did.
Your expression and decriptions are so detailed and moving and the whole situation is both heartbreaking and beautiful. Its short, but its impact is amazing I can't believe you haven't got more reviews. I loved this.