for You3/30/2010 c1 caroline Miller
This is very well written and it just flowed nicely. I also felt the emotion within this poem.
This is very well written and it just flowed nicely. I also felt the emotion within this poem.
6/20/2009 c1 Isca
"I'm coming to you." The tone of this line is so sorrowful, and yet, the idea that one would follow a lover into death is rather beautiful.
"And the pain and sadness are always there." Alas, that is very true-such deep emotions rarely go away completely.
"I'm coming to you." The tone of this line is so sorrowful, and yet, the idea that one would follow a lover into death is rather beautiful.
"And the pain and sadness are always there." Alas, that is very true-such deep emotions rarely go away completely.
6/10/2009 c1 
95words are all I have
This is a good poem but in your summary, y6ou say "About someone falling in love with an emo" as if all emos cut themselves and it is not true. I`m emo thank you very much and that stereotype has made my school life hell so if you could please tell me you dont really think that it would be nice.
95words are all I haveThis is a good poem but in your summary, y6ou say "About someone falling in love with an emo" as if all emos cut themselves and it is not true. I`m emo thank you very much and that stereotype has made my school life hell so if you could please tell me you dont really think that it would be nice.