for Better to Have Loved8/4/2010 c13 anony
oh god i love these too! i just finished reading imagine me and you and though i was kinda rooting for jill/emily but after reading it i am totally in love with jill and anna... but i am still kinda curious if jill and emily stay friends..
oh god i love these too! i just finished reading imagine me and you and though i was kinda rooting for jill/emily but after reading it i am totally in love with jill and anna... but i am still kinda curious if jill and emily stay friends..
5/11/2010 c13 
2Spawner
Glad you can't keep from writing about Anna and Jill because I wouldn't want you to stop. I love these two characters, and would love to see what would happen if they had a baby of their own =]
PS: Awesome chapter by the way
Keep writing!
-Spawner
2SpawnerGlad you can't keep from writing about Anna and Jill because I wouldn't want you to stop. I love these two characters, and would love to see what would happen if they had a baby of their own =]
PS: Awesome chapter by the way
Keep writing!
-Spawner
5/10/2010 c13 35StarvingLunatic
This was just touching in several ways. First, I like that Jill and Anna have a relationship where they are comfortable and freely talk about anything, like the woman saying every child was entitled to a mother and a father. I thought it was very realistic how this bothered Pierce, even though I wish she had actually just told the woman where to shove it. I liked Jill's heart-to-heart with her student. That was the most touching part of it, actually. I do hope that Jill and Pierce build a family. They seem like they would be good at being moms. I also hope that Lorelei finds what she's looking for. Oh, and that thing about the sunflowers, awesome!
35StarvingLunaticThis was just touching in several ways. First, I like that Jill and Anna have a relationship where they are comfortable and freely talk about anything, like the woman saying every child was entitled to a mother and a father. I thought it was very realistic how this bothered Pierce, even though I wish she had actually just told the woman where to shove it. I liked Jill's heart-to-heart with her student. That was the most touching part of it, actually. I do hope that Jill and Pierce build a family. They seem like they would be good at being moms. I also hope that Lorelei finds what she's looking for. Oh, and that thing about the sunflowers, awesome!
3/1/2010 c12 Guest
Can't wait to see if they have a baby. I think this is one of my favorite written couples so far. Maybe because I can kind of relate to Anna's high spirit? Who knows. Update soon! I'll be checking =]
Keep Writing
-Spawner
Can't wait to see if they have a baby. I think this is one of my favorite written couples so far. Maybe because I can kind of relate to Anna's high spirit? Who knows. Update soon! I'll be checking =]
Keep Writing
-Spawner
2/19/2010 c12 4i'm a barrymore 2
Not to sound like a creeper, but you DO know how to write a good intimate scene :)
Excellent chapter though, really. I absolutely love Anna, and I love that Jill is not perfect all the time. She seems to have a consistent issue with drink just a tad more than she can handle.
Give 'em a baby! That'd be so cute!
4i'm a barrymore 2Not to sound like a creeper, but you DO know how to write a good intimate scene :)
Excellent chapter though, really. I absolutely love Anna, and I love that Jill is not perfect all the time. She seems to have a consistent issue with drink just a tad more than she can handle.
Give 'em a baby! That'd be so cute!
1/28/2010 c6 Brenda Agaro
I like how you show what happened during the ending of "Imagine Me and You" (at least the mention of it.) Also, I like the slow development between Anna and Jill. Their interaction was well execution. And oh, there's a chance that Jill could meet with McKenzie? I'll definitely read and see. ;D
I like how you show what happened during the ending of "Imagine Me and You" (at least the mention of it.) Also, I like the slow development between Anna and Jill. Their interaction was well execution. And oh, there's a chance that Jill could meet with McKenzie? I'll definitely read and see. ;D
1/28/2010 c5 Brenda Agaro
Kaitlyn living on impluse...I usually don't condone bisexuals who "get with anyone"...and breaking a Lesbian's heart in that way. But I can understand that she's young and curious about her sexuality. And she doesn't seem to be like the fake bisexual. Sorry, just want to say that. :X
I actually like how you're telling these stories. It doesn't drag and the conflict is being maintained (good showing at the beginning.) I like how Anna is introduced in this one as well.
Kaitlyn living on impluse...I usually don't condone bisexuals who "get with anyone"...and breaking a Lesbian's heart in that way. But I can understand that she's young and curious about her sexuality. And she doesn't seem to be like the fake bisexual. Sorry, just want to say that. :X
I actually like how you're telling these stories. It doesn't drag and the conflict is being maintained (good showing at the beginning.) I like how Anna is introduced in this one as well.
1/27/2010 c12 35StarvingLunatic
Woo-hoo more from these two! And Jill busting out the kinks! Anna should've known that meeting with Kaitlyn was going to blow up in her face, but I'm sure if she knew it would blow up like it did, she would've met with Kaitlyn sooner! I hope you continue on with these two and maybe throw in a little more Kaitlyn and such for some drama. And I'm always up for more of Jill's family, you know, for drama's sake. Anyway, this was a nice chapter! Good work.
35StarvingLunaticWoo-hoo more from these two! And Jill busting out the kinks! Anna should've known that meeting with Kaitlyn was going to blow up in her face, but I'm sure if she knew it would blow up like it did, she would've met with Kaitlyn sooner! I hope you continue on with these two and maybe throw in a little more Kaitlyn and such for some drama. And I'm always up for more of Jill's family, you know, for drama's sake. Anyway, this was a nice chapter! Good work.
1/27/2010 c4 Brenda Agaro
I would like to read a chapter expanding on what happened after Jill's coming out. But I figured that most have been covered from the dialogue. If you want to do it, it's fine.
:-)
Of course I knew about the Irish Setter already. XD Good foreshadowing at the end (last sentence), even though I know what's going to happen next, ha ha. XD
A great oneshot as always. I enjoyed reading it, especially the characterization, interaction, and details.
I would like to read a chapter expanding on what happened after Jill's coming out. But I figured that most have been covered from the dialogue. If you want to do it, it's fine.
:-)
Of course I knew about the Irish Setter already. XD Good foreshadowing at the end (last sentence), even though I know what's going to happen next, ha ha. XD
A great oneshot as always. I enjoyed reading it, especially the characterization, interaction, and details.
1/27/2010 c12 table9
Yay! Another update! :D That was wonderful and I enjoyed the Superman/Lois Lane costume combo. Although, my favorite was Brooke and Brian as Sid & Nancy! Loved it! ^^ Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter!
Yay! Another update! :D That was wonderful and I enjoyed the Superman/Lois Lane costume combo. Although, my favorite was Brooke and Brian as Sid & Nancy! Loved it! ^^ Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter!
1/27/2010 c12 adt
amazing amazing!
amazing amazing!
1/26/2010 c12 eastoq3
YES! I can't tell you how happy I'm that you updated. This story is my ultimate favorite one. Keep up the good work and I hope we'll see more updates!
YES! I can't tell you how happy I'm that you updated. This story is my ultimate favorite one. Keep up the good work and I hope we'll see more updates!
1/21/2010 c3 Brenda Agaro
This is my favorite story so far. The birthday, Jill coming out to her parents, and McKenzie - well done. Jill's parents' reaction may seem a bit typical, but since it happened during Jill's past, I thought that it fits. I like how you portrayed Zack's innocence to the situation as well.
It could just be me, but I'm seeing a parallel in McKenzie telling Jill that they should wait until Jill came out to her parents, to the situation with Jill and Emily. At least the commitment part.
Also, I like the references to "The Hobbit" and "Lord of the Rings", especially the Hobbit tradition on birthdays.
Overall, well written. Of course it was long, but I was hooked to the end.
This is my favorite story so far. The birthday, Jill coming out to her parents, and McKenzie - well done. Jill's parents' reaction may seem a bit typical, but since it happened during Jill's past, I thought that it fits. I like how you portrayed Zack's innocence to the situation as well.
It could just be me, but I'm seeing a parallel in McKenzie telling Jill that they should wait until Jill came out to her parents, to the situation with Jill and Emily. At least the commitment part.
Also, I like the references to "The Hobbit" and "Lord of the Rings", especially the Hobbit tradition on birthdays.
Overall, well written. Of course it was long, but I was hooked to the end.