for Better to Have Loved1/19/2010 c2 Brenda Agaro
I admired how you executed the tension between Jill and McKenzie. To me, it was well written. Cute and tasteful.
I admired how you executed the tension between Jill and McKenzie. To me, it was well written. Cute and tasteful.
1/19/2010 c1 Brenda Agaro
Oh, wow! That was a great read there. I like the interaction and characterization. It really felt like real life. I could just relate to it. My favorite part was Jill being with McKenzie.
Oh, wow! That was a great read there. I like the interaction and characterization. It really felt like real life. I could just relate to it. My favorite part was Jill being with McKenzie.
12/22/2009 c11 
12MBaxter
Is this the end? I hope not because it's a wonderful story. You are very good at giving a complete description of what's going on and seemlessly moving from one scene to the next. I'd love to see more to this, even though this is a good place to stop as well.
Baxter
12MBaxterIs this the end? I hope not because it's a wonderful story. You are very good at giving a complete description of what's going on and seemlessly moving from one scene to the next. I'd love to see more to this, even though this is a good place to stop as well.
Baxter
12/7/2009 c11 table9
You've done it again! This was an amazing, emotional trip that you sent the readers on! The characters were delightful and the story was moving! Anyway, thank you again for another masterpiece!
You've done it again! This was an amazing, emotional trip that you sent the readers on! The characters were delightful and the story was moving! Anyway, thank you again for another masterpiece!
11/6/2009 c11 2Spawner
See! I knew you could do it! Awesome!
So now, they need to have kids, or something needs to continue, because you can't end this story. They're my favorite characters to read about.
Thanks for writing, and hope you continue with this one!
It's amazing!
-Spawner
2SpawnerSee! I knew you could do it! Awesome!
So now, they need to have kids, or something needs to continue, because you can't end this story. They're my favorite characters to read about.
Thanks for writing, and hope you continue with this one!
It's amazing!
-Spawner
10/31/2009 c11 15Slightly Ajar
Oh, how cute! Can't believe they actually got married, but I'm glad they did. And for me, as a reader, I think the sex scene was also definitely worth the wait! Great job! I'll be looking for the Amy Willows story!
15Slightly AjarOh, how cute! Can't believe they actually got married, but I'm glad they did. And for me, as a reader, I think the sex scene was also definitely worth the wait! Great job! I'll be looking for the Amy Willows story!
10/28/2009 c11 buttercup.bitch
oh god! awesome! oh yeah please i dont think so that anybody has had enough of jill god i love jill and anna ! please continue with them!
oh god! awesome! oh yeah please i dont think so that anybody has had enough of jill god i love jill and anna ! please continue with them!
10/28/2009 c11 adt
NOT FAIR! after such a long wait you finally wrote a wonderful sex scene of them and now you are leaving them just here? no no i want to see their honeymoon their first fight make up sex(wink wink )plz
NOT FAIR! after such a long wait you finally wrote a wonderful sex scene of them and now you are leaving them just here? no no i want to see their honeymoon their first fight make up sex(wink wink )plz
10/28/2009 c11 adt
heyi NOT FAIR!
heyi NOT FAIR!
10/28/2009 c11 35StarvingLunatic
Woo-hoo! *jumps up and down* I loved every minute of this. It felt a little rushed, like you wanted to jump right to the wedding, but I really don't mind. You tell a good story, always, and you wrote a good *whispers* sex scene. I'm hoping for many more chapters of this, just seeing Jill and Anna being an old married couple. I really enjoy your characters. Okay, enough out of me. I'm gonna go check out your new story now! Take care. Hasta...
35StarvingLunaticWoo-hoo! *jumps up and down* I loved every minute of this. It felt a little rushed, like you wanted to jump right to the wedding, but I really don't mind. You tell a good story, always, and you wrote a good *whispers* sex scene. I'm hoping for many more chapters of this, just seeing Jill and Anna being an old married couple. I really enjoy your characters. Okay, enough out of me. I'm gonna go check out your new story now! Take care. Hasta...
10/26/2009 c10 15Slightly Ajar
Yay! Great chapter! Really, really loved it! Great idea about the family having told Zack Jill had run away, very poignant. :)
15Slightly AjarYay! Great chapter! Really, really loved it! Great idea about the family having told Zack Jill had run away, very poignant. :)
10/24/2009 c10 35StarvingLunatic
The moment of truth! Loved it! So, Mama Shovet stuck to her guns and continued to be an butthole. Should've known. I'm a little sad to hear about Jill's father, only because that is some cold, inconsiderate, just stone-hearted crap from her family. Someone should have tried to find her and tell her about that. But, what should one expect from a family that can throw a kid out on the street and never think about her again. I'm still really enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope to see more interactions between Jill and her family and I also hope that Jill and Pierce keep up what they're doing...with a little less drama. Don't want Pierce to have a heart attack at a young age. ^_^ Great work. Take care. Hasta...
35StarvingLunaticThe moment of truth! Loved it! So, Mama Shovet stuck to her guns and continued to be an butthole. Should've known. I'm a little sad to hear about Jill's father, only because that is some cold, inconsiderate, just stone-hearted crap from her family. Someone should have tried to find her and tell her about that. But, what should one expect from a family that can throw a kid out on the street and never think about her again. I'm still really enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope to see more interactions between Jill and her family and I also hope that Jill and Pierce keep up what they're doing...with a little less drama. Don't want Pierce to have a heart attack at a young age. ^_^ Great work. Take care. Hasta...
10/23/2009 c10 ady
great chapter! i hate jills mather though zac was real sweet... so anna didnt get lucky in this chapter aww man!
great chapter! i hate jills mather though zac was real sweet... so anna didnt get lucky in this chapter aww man!
10/23/2009 c10 Rosy
Wow! What a great chapter! thanks a lot for the update
Wow! What a great chapter! thanks a lot for the update
9/20/2009 c9 uga buga boo
oh my god its amazing! i love anna... she's awesome! looking forward to the sex scene ! i sound so creepy..lols..
oh my god its amazing! i love anna... she's awesome! looking forward to the sex scene ! i sound so creepy..lols..