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1/8/2010 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I liked all of your attention to detail in this. Especially the small details like the smell of coffee in the morning, and fatigue at night. They all really helped to ground the pome with a strong since of realism.

I also enjoyed your overall message of smaller things in life are important. It seems like it’s often displayed as the other way around but I liked how you made your mark with this. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.
6/28/2009 c1 28howdylv08
Very well done. I loved it.

Sophie :3
6/12/2009 c1 18Shenhua Phantom
I love this. It's beautiful and makes a really good point. I like the style of this poem. It flows very well. Keep up the good work. :D

~Shenhua Phantom

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