for Deadly Love12/2/2012 c4 
19Alaeryel
Ok Kem-I am only on Ch 4 and am already questioning why this story was cancelled. This may be a dark themed story BUT it is still a wonderful one. It broke my heart that she felt it was her only way out but I am not judging her-how could I when I have felt much like she has and also had tried to end things a couple times myself! I think that is why your story here touches me deeply and I am loving it as much as I am. I can relate to pretty much everything she has endured although mine wasn't of the physical abuse but another-I really love this!
19AlaeryelOk Kem-I am only on Ch 4 and am already questioning why this story was cancelled. This may be a dark themed story BUT it is still a wonderful one. It broke my heart that she felt it was her only way out but I am not judging her-how could I when I have felt much like she has and also had tried to end things a couple times myself! I think that is why your story here touches me deeply and I am loving it as much as I am. I can relate to pretty much everything she has endured although mine wasn't of the physical abuse but another-I really love this!
12/2/2012 c3 Alaeryel
OMG-this chapter completely broke my heart and damnit it made me literally bawl! I cannot believe Eric was killed-after everything he had been through and everything that Cassie did trying to help them! I am again curious as to what happened and where Nikkei is and I so wanted to do a beat down on her father! I love stories that can actually pull the emotions from me and this story does that-BEAUTIFUL WRITING!
OMG-this chapter completely broke my heart and damnit it made me literally bawl! I cannot believe Eric was killed-after everything he had been through and everything that Cassie did trying to help them! I am again curious as to what happened and where Nikkei is and I so wanted to do a beat down on her father! I love stories that can actually pull the emotions from me and this story does that-BEAUTIFUL WRITING!
12/2/2012 c2 Alaeryel
My God I want to kill the bastard or just beat him senseless! What they have had to live thru for so long just breaks my heart but I give Cassie ALOT OF CREDIT for helping get the twins out of the situation and curiosity has me asking why she didn't run with them. I really hate to think what her father would do if he found out about the kitten-it makes my stomach roil thinking about it. Great writing and very interesting and emotional story-I LOVE IT!
My God I want to kill the bastard or just beat him senseless! What they have had to live thru for so long just breaks my heart but I give Cassie ALOT OF CREDIT for helping get the twins out of the situation and curiosity has me asking why she didn't run with them. I really hate to think what her father would do if he found out about the kitten-it makes my stomach roil thinking about it. Great writing and very interesting and emotional story-I LOVE IT!
12/2/2012 c1 Alaeryel
OMG what an intense and mind capturing start to a story Kem. I felt it was well written and beautifully done. Definitely looking forward to reading more here.
OMG what an intense and mind capturing start to a story Kem. I felt it was well written and beautifully done. Definitely looking forward to reading more here.
7/14/2009 c21 17mousegirl05
A very sad and touching ending to a complex and interesting story. Your vampire design is intriguing to say the least. The only 'problem' I had with the story was the heavy use of non-English words. While I realize I'm handicapped by my mono-lingualness, it is still a handicap. ^_^ This means a story full of non-English words is challenging to read. Just something to consider or not. Cheers!
17mousegirl05A very sad and touching ending to a complex and interesting story. Your vampire design is intriguing to say the least. The only 'problem' I had with the story was the heavy use of non-English words. While I realize I'm handicapped by my mono-lingualness, it is still a handicap. ^_^ This means a story full of non-English words is challenging to read. Just something to consider or not. Cheers!
7/12/2009 c21 44zeck-zeecola8
Wow, this was a bit confusing. I had to reread it a couple times. I thought this chapter was a bit strange and sudden. It made the story weird, to a point. I don't know how to explain it. This chapter also seemed rushed a bit.
44zeck-zeecola8Wow, this was a bit confusing. I had to reread it a couple times. I thought this chapter was a bit strange and sudden. It made the story weird, to a point. I don't know how to explain it. This chapter also seemed rushed a bit.
7/12/2009 c20 zeck-zeecola8
Ooh. This was interesting. I like the wedding descriptions. I think this chapter was a little rushed. I would've liked to see it go a bit slower, maybe have more detailed.
Ooh. This was interesting. I like the wedding descriptions. I think this chapter was a little rushed. I would've liked to see it go a bit slower, maybe have more detailed.
7/9/2009 c20 bbyxhann
i sorta got lost at the end ,
but it was super good nevertheless .
(:
great job , & yay shes married !
:D
i sorta got lost at the end ,
but it was super good nevertheless .
(:
great job , & yay shes married !
:D
6/30/2009 c18 bbyxhann
lol , okay .
(:
& this was a really sad & touchy chapter .
poor aaron .
but keep it up !
& aw , already ?
lol , okay .
(:
& this was a really sad & touchy chapter .
poor aaron .
but keep it up !
& aw , already ?
6/28/2009 c19 zeck-zeecola8
This is helpful. Thanks, I could kind of guess what it was, but it was smart of you to put the translations in.
This is helpful. Thanks, I could kind of guess what it was, but it was smart of you to put the translations in.
6/28/2009 c18 zeck-zeecola8
This chapter was amazing. I love Jayden. I will have to visit your poll soon, once I get more time. I am backed up and I have tons to do, I will return to the story tonight.
This chapter was amazing. I love Jayden. I will have to visit your poll soon, once I get more time. I am backed up and I have tons to do, I will return to the story tonight.
6/28/2009 c17 zeck-zeecola8
This did clear up a lot of the story. I am so interested in it. It's sad, but has its humor. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This was a great chapter.
This did clear up a lot of the story. I am so interested in it. It's sad, but has its humor. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This was a great chapter.