for Deadly Love6/27/2009 c17 bbyxhann
lol , it did help .
thank you !
& thanks for updating soon too .
(:
well keep it up .
:D
lol , it did help .
thank you !
& thanks for updating soon too .
(:
well keep it up .
:D
6/27/2009 c16 bbyxhann
whoa this got super confusing .
she's a werewolve ?
& vampire ?
oh & wasn't she suppose to go with them ?
he -king- said that she comes with him ,
& he'll help jocolyn .
whoa this got super confusing .
she's a werewolve ?
& vampire ?
oh & wasn't she suppose to go with them ?
he -king- said that she comes with him ,
& he'll help jocolyn .
6/27/2009 c7 
6Lanie Is
Wait... WHAT?
A little to fast. You need to slow it down some. I barely got the facts out of this chapter. Maybe that's just me...
6Lanie IsWait... WHAT?
A little to fast. You need to slow it down some. I barely got the facts out of this chapter. Maybe that's just me...
6/27/2009 c6 Lanie Is
WOW. Sorry, I've been reading. One: MY NAME'S JAYDEN. But I'm a girl. Haha.
And two: WOW.
I'm a little confused as to what's going on. So she's been in a coma for ten months then? And who is this stalker that kind of reminds me of Edward with possessive problems?
Okay, I'll continue on and see if this clear up a bit. :)
WOW. Sorry, I've been reading. One: MY NAME'S JAYDEN. But I'm a girl. Haha.
And two: WOW.
I'm a little confused as to what's going on. So she's been in a coma for ten months then? And who is this stalker that kind of reminds me of Edward with possessive problems?
Okay, I'll continue on and see if this clear up a bit. :)
6/27/2009 c16 44zeck-zeecola8
This is awesome. I love the chapter. I am confused with the wolf part. Aren't they vampires? If so, how do they turn into werewolves? If they do? I just got a little confused.
44zeck-zeecola8This is awesome. I love the chapter. I am confused with the wolf part. Aren't they vampires? If so, how do they turn into werewolves? If they do? I just got a little confused.
6/23/2009 c15 bbyxhann
whoaa , alot happened .
but it was really exciting .
well aw , you're awesome too !
though theres lack of review ,
you still continue on writing .(:
great job , & keep it up .
whoaa , alot happened .
but it was really exciting .
well aw , you're awesome too !
though theres lack of review ,
you still continue on writing .(:
great job , & keep it up .
6/23/2009 c15 zeck-zeecola8
Ooh, this just hit the jackpot of interesting. I like it. The story is good. The descriptions are excellent. I can't wait for an update.
Ooh, this just hit the jackpot of interesting. I like it. The story is good. The descriptions are excellent. I can't wait for an update.
6/23/2009 c14 zeck-zeecola8
Yet again, another twist. I like where this story is headed. I like Cassie's character, she is still a fighter, but she knows her limits. That's good. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Yet again, another twist. I like where this story is headed. I like Cassie's character, she is still a fighter, but she knows her limits. That's good. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
6/23/2009 c13 zeck-zeecola8
Well that's a wake up call. I like this story. It is good. This chapter is excellent. I like how the story keeps you interested. You have enough going on to keep the reader interested and wanting more.
Well that's a wake up call. I like this story. It is good. This chapter is excellent. I like how the story keeps you interested. You have enough going on to keep the reader interested and wanting more.
6/23/2009 c12 zeck-zeecola8
Wow, and the old Cassie returns. I like it. I can't wait to read more. This is interesting and different from any other book that I have read.
Wow, and the old Cassie returns. I like it. I can't wait to read more. This is interesting and different from any other book that I have read.
6/23/2009 c11 zeck-zeecola8
I like Cassie's attitude. I am confused by Jayden, he has so many different sides. It's cool though, it sets a tone that he is conflicted.
I like Cassie's attitude. I am confused by Jayden, he has so many different sides. It's cool though, it sets a tone that he is conflicted.
6/23/2009 c10 zeck-zeecola8
Interesting...I like it. It has some funny parts, as well as exciting parts. Not much to say though. It's the kind of story that I need to process and really think about, but first need to read.
Interesting...I like it. It has some funny parts, as well as exciting parts. Not much to say though. It's the kind of story that I need to process and really think about, but first need to read.
6/23/2009 c9 zeck-zeecola8
I am so curious as to what the box was for. I guess it is like a cliff hanger. Once again, the story keeps getting interesting. I like it though.It has some great emotions involved.
I am so curious as to what the box was for. I guess it is like a cliff hanger. Once again, the story keeps getting interesting. I like it though.It has some great emotions involved.
6/23/2009 c8 zeck-zeecola8
This was such a good chapter. I really am liking this story.I don't know what else to say about it. No errors, good description.I will go read more to find out more.
This was such a good chapter. I really am liking this story.I don't know what else to say about it. No errors, good description.I will go read more to find out more.
6/23/2009 c7 zeck-zeecola8
Well, this is quite a shocker. The story just got unbelievably good. I can't believe it. So this is a news flash for her. What inspired you to come up with this story?
Well, this is quite a shocker. The story just got unbelievably good. I can't believe it. So this is a news flash for her. What inspired you to come up with this story?