for Deadly Love6/23/2009 c6 
44zeck-zeecola8
Wow, that was a sudden shock. I am really liking this story. It is quite amazing.I like the end of this chapter. It was a twist, that's for sure. I am off to read more.
44zeck-zeecola8Wow, that was a sudden shock. I am really liking this story. It is quite amazing.I like the end of this chapter. It was a twist, that's for sure. I am off to read more.
6/23/2009 c5 zeck-zeecola8
Ooh, this was so good. It had me on edge waiting to discover what happened. I can't wait to read more. There was a tiny error on one part, just a typo. I think you said liek instead of like. That's okay, no big deal.
Ooh, this was so good. It had me on edge waiting to discover what happened. I can't wait to read more. There was a tiny error on one part, just a typo. I think you said liek instead of like. That's okay, no big deal.
6/23/2009 c4 zeck-zeecola8
Ouch, that totally sucks. Back to the review. I thought it was pretty good. I didn't see any errors in it. Which I love. It's magnificent details. Is her dad nice when he is sober? Or is it an act? Just curious. Got a little confused there.
Ouch, that totally sucks. Back to the review. I thought it was pretty good. I didn't see any errors in it. Which I love. It's magnificent details. Is her dad nice when he is sober? Or is it an act? Just curious. Got a little confused there.
6/23/2009 c3 zeck-zeecola8
I am happy for the twins, I am interested in this story. It is well written and the descriptions are simple and easy to picture, which adds to the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I am happy for the twins, I am interested in this story. It is well written and the descriptions are simple and easy to picture, which adds to the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
6/23/2009 c2 zeck-zeecola8
This is getting interesting. I can't wait to continue reading the story. I like the quick descriptions, and action in the story.
This is getting interesting. I can't wait to continue reading the story. I like the quick descriptions, and action in the story.
6/23/2009 c15 1VampireAcademyDB
GREAT CHAPTER i really miss Jayden and when he let her get taken without doing shit ... lol omg I was so mad at him... bt I love him now... and imagine if she was pregnant... 0.o DRAMA :)
1VampireAcademyDBGREAT CHAPTER i really miss Jayden and when he let her get taken without doing shit ... lol omg I was so mad at him... bt I love him now... and imagine if she was pregnant... 0.o DRAMA :)
6/19/2009 c13 bbyxhann
wow , is jayden that super angry ?
jeez .
his lifemate is getting taken .
good lord .
well anyway , that was pretty good .
update soon .(:
wow , is jayden that super angry ?
jeez .
his lifemate is getting taken .
good lord .
well anyway , that was pretty good .
update soon .(:
6/17/2009 c12 bbyxhann
whoa , she slapped him .
hard .
i wanna know what happens next !
update soon ,
pleasee .
& sorry i didnt review the others .
whoa , she slapped him .
hard .
i wanna know what happens next !
update soon ,
pleasee .
& sorry i didnt review the others .
6/17/2009 c2 bbyxhann
whoa , thats a really scary father .
why didnt she go with them ?
& please ,
the mother would be way more disappointed in him .
whoa , thats a really scary father .
why didnt she go with them ?
& please ,
the mother would be way more disappointed in him .
6/17/2009 c12 VampireAcademyDB
I really like this story and how Jayden uses miele... I really like Jayden also and Cassandra makes me laugh :)
I really like this story and how Jayden uses miele... I really like Jayden also and Cassandra makes me laugh :)