for Lostness6/17/2009 c1 That took forever. XD
Okay, it took me a good hour to read this, but i totally blame that on the fact that i was AIM-ing you while i read so i was continually distracted. First off, the narrator, dear to my heart. There were a couple of sentences where I was like "crap, she's me!" XD But besides that, I love Noah and how Ella, like most people, can't sort out whether she's in love or not. Love really is like that mosty days. You're never quite sure if you're in it or if you're mind's playing games with you. Love it likes always
Okay, it took me a good hour to read this, but i totally blame that on the fact that i was AIM-ing you while i read so i was continually distracted. First off, the narrator, dear to my heart. There were a couple of sentences where I was like "crap, she's me!" XD But besides that, I love Noah and how Ella, like most people, can't sort out whether she's in love or not. Love really is like that mosty days. You're never quite sure if you're in it or if you're mind's playing games with you. Love it likes always
6/15/2009 c1 affectations
this was amazing. i'm not too good at reviews but i'm writing this because your story really hit me. i love the way you write, it's beautiful. you write in a way that reminds me of my favourite books, i love the way you put words together, the way you describe people. everything about this story felt so true, i connected with it a lot. the characters were so realistic and complex and i love how you created the town and that feeling of being stuck in it, especially how you wrote that feeling of lostness that really just hit me when i was reading it and those truths that hurt like not knowing someone. you've managed to capture so much, just your story feels so expansive, so much like life. i think you are really talented and i think the best stories are the ones that really affect you emotionally as well and your story did that for me. thank you, i really enjoyed reading it.
this was amazing. i'm not too good at reviews but i'm writing this because your story really hit me. i love the way you write, it's beautiful. you write in a way that reminds me of my favourite books, i love the way you put words together, the way you describe people. everything about this story felt so true, i connected with it a lot. the characters were so realistic and complex and i love how you created the town and that feeling of being stuck in it, especially how you wrote that feeling of lostness that really just hit me when i was reading it and those truths that hurt like not knowing someone. you've managed to capture so much, just your story feels so expansive, so much like life. i think you are really talented and i think the best stories are the ones that really affect you emotionally as well and your story did that for me. thank you, i really enjoyed reading it.
6/14/2009 c1 
10A Typical Aquarius
This story is pretty much amazing.
I love everything about it, and really have no criticism.
I just wanted to let you know.
10A Typical AquariusThis story is pretty much amazing.
I love everything about it, and really have no criticism.
I just wanted to let you know.