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6/19/2009 c4 Ink-Stain'd
If Rainie wants angry sex she should just have it with Alex. Megacock is beyond awesome.
6/19/2009 c4 1readaholicxxx
haha i can't get enough of this story!
6/18/2009 c4 4jammi
So basically, she wants Alex but only if she doesn't know it's him. Someone nice and anonymous who she can engage in some angry/hate sex with without being judged.

At least she's open with her sexuality even if she wants someone who seems a bit insane. she better hope he doesn't find her and turns out to be a honest head case [beyond what we see] who will end this dare game ala Se7en style, with her head in a box cause she doesn't want to play wife to him.

Anyhoo, for some reason i'm just picturing Melanie as a super thin girl with long hair and big ol' thumper eyes. Like a fairy or something, attractive but innocent. Which is what you were going for I think.

LOL at such a cute memory [for her sister] is something so embarrassing for her.

And brap!brap! [hand gestures and that weird finger snap thing included, haha] to her for beating his ass for being a pervert. LMAO that she broke into his house and beat him *and* destroyed his computer, hahah, yo'd think she'd get her urge for violence fulfilled whenever she sees Alex. But then again, I guess that was a rare moment of her actually paying him back in full.

'Rudy-roo I love you' ... that's some love right there, because if that's not the most emasculating thing ever, LOL, just call him Pooksie bear and done.

Umm... the parents are pretty oblivious, I have to say, and he has balls for talking like that in front of her mom, though I guess he knew she wouldn't say anything and his parents are pretty much open to sex.

Although, question, if he doesn't want video of her floating around being assaulted since he'd be the one to get in trouble for it, why would they think he'd uploaded a video of her changing when the only person who could be blamed would be him?

Oh, and I have to say Megacock is a jerk for winning his dare on a technicality [why was I imagining him pulling a Jackass like stunt, or on the least lighting a straw man on fire, lol] but then getting so specific with his response to her, lol, not even some random dog but the Patterson's.
6/18/2009 c4 anne
by any chance - Alex is MC? I really feel bad for her! But they (alex and her) are the comic relief!
6/18/2009 c3 Ink-Stain'd
Dear God...I hope that Alex and Rainie get together. I love your story really funny and cute. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
6/18/2009 c3 1readaholicxxx
hehe i always look forward to the baneters between Alex and Rainie
6/17/2009 c3 4jammi
Wow, he's nice, LOL, [paraphrasing] 'i don't care if you get raped, but i do give a shit if I get hassled because of it.' straight up class right there, LMAO.

It sucks though that Alex was more of a brother figure to her for a few years growing up and he hates her life, he's an asshole, and who reads a text book to someone like that ish is interesting? He doesn't even understand what the hell he was reading, lol.

I give her props for taking on the dare, for some reason I was expecting to um and haw about it, so the fact that she did it quickly gives her a plus.

LOL at that guy full on having no problem hitting on an eighteen year old but acting all disgusted when she's seventeen, because one year really makes such a huge difference maturity wise *eye roll* the only difference is that she's legal in the country and if she's in Quebec/Europe she can drink.
6/17/2009 c3 anon
i thought that alex may (MAY) like her but with what he said towards the end... well then hmm, maybe not!
6/17/2009 c2 1readaholicxxx
great end to the chapter!
6/15/2009 c2 2hippies tie-dye their socks
Hey! Well... I just read your story and I think I really need to say... I love you. You're very cool and awesome and... well yeah. I think you probably get the idea.

Just one thing to watch (becuse apparently we're actually meant to be like... giving helpful critiscm or something) is the grammar and stuff. Like, when you were writing the letter to Rainie or watever, you said, and I quote "That's sounds exciting."

It should have been "That sounds exciting."

So yeah. There;s my only criticsm... be happy.

But yeah, write more if you're in the mood, like if you're bored or meant to be doing homework...
6/15/2009 c2 marri
wonder who replied back to her? hmm...
6/15/2009 c2 4jammi
HAHAHAHAH, oh man. Gotta give you props for breaking who knows how many fp taboos second chapter in; she smokes, sleeps around, and wants ROUGH SEX.
6/15/2009 c1 1readaholicxxx
haha this is great!
6/14/2009 c1 marri
am i the first reviewer?

anyways, the title is odd and funny at the same time! definitely, wanna see where this fic is going... good luck!
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