for A Funny, Little Love Story6/23/2012 c1 aries4life
Really great love story. BUT Jack should still give her a cooky once in a while; )
Really great love story. BUT Jack should still give her a cooky once in a while; )
11/27/2011 c1 
1Ashia Blue
I loovvvee it! Hahah. A twist of comedy and romance! So funny, but i love how the stroy flows. Wish i'll have someone like jack. :))
Anyway, good luck with the COOKYS. ;)
xoxo
Ashia Blue.
1Ashia BlueI loovvvee it! Hahah. A twist of comedy and romance! So funny, but i love how the stroy flows. Wish i'll have someone like jack. :))
Anyway, good luck with the COOKYS. ;)
xoxo
Ashia Blue.
11/8/2009 c1 LifeFlamez
aw... that was so cute! it seems Sarah Lylaky is a really awesome girl, and this is an awesome one-shot! LOL, it was so cool =)
aw... that was so cute! it seems Sarah Lylaky is a really awesome girl, and this is an awesome one-shot! LOL, it was so cool =)
10/31/2009 c1 Anonymousreader
Haha this is soo cute! I knew from the start that she was going to end wuth JakexD
Haha this is soo cute! I knew from the start that she was going to end wuth JakexD
6/15/2009 c1 5RoseBriar32192
Aw! This is such a cute story! I loved it! I also love how it progressed a lot! I think it would be awesome if you made this into a full story starting from where you left her a sixteen. It sounds like it would be a good book! I knew her and Jack would end up together! LOVED IT! - RoseBriar
(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on AWESOME books and stories.)
5RoseBriar32192Aw! This is such a cute story! I loved it! I also love how it progressed a lot! I think it would be awesome if you made this into a full story starting from where you left her a sixteen. It sounds like it would be a good book! I knew her and Jack would end up together! LOVED IT! - RoseBriar
(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on AWESOME books and stories.)
6/14/2009 c1 Sweet Sugar Rupture
i really enjoyed this. i thought it was an original idea, and it sure made me laugh! you actually made it seem like a six-year-old could've written the first one. good job =]
i really enjoyed this. i thought it was an original idea, and it sure made me laugh! you actually made it seem like a six-year-old could've written the first one. good job =]