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5/4/2011 c9 17BoomShaKaLaKaLa
this idea is very original. never read anything like it before. it seems also like you have a plan and know what's going to happen so i seriously can't wait to find out what will happen to them. more asap plz :)
7/30/2009 c5 1Unconditional
this chapter made it intersting...HOPE it gets better
7/23/2009 c4 Unconditional
HEY! um OK this story has lots of errors, but i suggest a BETA,so that you can make your story sound better.It was an overall nice read
7/23/2009 c4 abcdefgh
Interesting plot line. You took a classic idea (stuck on a deserted island) and added your own twist to it. However, your grammar is close to horrible. Remember, capitalize the first word of each sentence. You do not need to put an extra space between quotation marks and words. When a quote is being ended, the comma goes inside the quotation marks. Watch your punctuation. Only one period is needed at the end of a sentence, unless the sentence is being ended with an ellipsis, which requires 3 periods. In addition, commas are used to separate dependent clauses that begin a sentence. When typing, two spaces are required after each sentence. For more info, go check a grammar book.

Keep writing! It'll only help you improve, and I'd like to see where this story goes.

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