for Standing Out1/11/2010 c1 
2Lullaby Street
hey! first off, I wanna thank you for the kind review you gave me. I am so glad that you what I wrote was able to get your imagination into action. Hahah yes, a bit violent but if that is what it made you think of then that is fine. I like that actually. So, again, thanks so much for taking the time to read one of my little writings.
Anyways, I really liked this poem of yours. it is very sincere and open...at least, that's how it made me feel the author was feeling. It was as if you are talking about normal day to day life with such pretty little metaphors and similes. It was simply...well, simple. Which made it stand out...no pun intended, I just only noticed that coincidence.
Do you usually write poems or was this just an experiment? Either way, it was pretty good.
Looking forward to an update on Perfect Face, seeing as how you left us hanging there, you big teaser.
That's all I've got to say.
Have a lovely day.
~Andy
2Lullaby Streethey! first off, I wanna thank you for the kind review you gave me. I am so glad that you what I wrote was able to get your imagination into action. Hahah yes, a bit violent but if that is what it made you think of then that is fine. I like that actually. So, again, thanks so much for taking the time to read one of my little writings.
Anyways, I really liked this poem of yours. it is very sincere and open...at least, that's how it made me feel the author was feeling. It was as if you are talking about normal day to day life with such pretty little metaphors and similes. It was simply...well, simple. Which made it stand out...no pun intended, I just only noticed that coincidence.
Do you usually write poems or was this just an experiment? Either way, it was pretty good.
Looking forward to an update on Perfect Face, seeing as how you left us hanging there, you big teaser.
That's all I've got to say.
Have a lovely day.
~Andy
10/27/2009 c1 1B.Goddess
Wow~ That was short and sweet. I loved the similes (Those are my favorite literary devices, besides alliteration ;) ) I think standing out is harder than one might think. But a beautiful poem! Hope to see more from you :)
1B.GoddessWow~ That was short and sweet. I loved the similes (Those are my favorite literary devices, besides alliteration ;) ) I think standing out is harder than one might think. But a beautiful poem! Hope to see more from you :)
7/11/2009 c1 3MzEatsaLot
mm very true! I like the line 'like a lone tree in a giant forest' the best!
3MzEatsaLotmm very true! I like the line 'like a lone tree in a giant forest' the best!