for The Lone Tree9/27/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
This is wonderful. "To see the pain that's eating from within" I like this line
173Little girl Big worldThis is wonderful. "To see the pain that's eating from within" I like this line
9/10/2009 c1 91High Sky
I know the feeling very well. To be a tree overshadowed by buildings that others built up, making insignificant the height that you fought so hard to attain without the aid of others. and yet your pride would no be injured so easily if there were just some other trees to share in your indignation.
or maybe i'm just reading the poem all wrong.
anyways, i love the imagery. keep it up.
Sky
91High SkyI know the feeling very well. To be a tree overshadowed by buildings that others built up, making insignificant the height that you fought so hard to attain without the aid of others. and yet your pride would no be injured so easily if there were just some other trees to share in your indignation.
or maybe i'm just reading the poem all wrong.
anyways, i love the imagery. keep it up.
Sky