11/1/2009 c5 14Renana
What I like about this is that it's a really fun read and it's well written too. I loove Jared so far, jealous people are so cute :) And I like Jasmine too because she seems realistic, her personality and such. This is a really cute story so far, update soon!
Renana
What I like about this is that it's a really fun read and it's well written too. I loove Jared so far, jealous people are so cute :) And I like Jasmine too because she seems realistic, her personality and such. This is a really cute story so far, update soon!
Renana
7/1/2009 c3 2XxSCENEandHEARDxX
Aw I think he was just trying to make her jelous by saying what he did, and now she's going out with stupid..Tony. Pft..Jareds better...^_^ Sorry I'm rambling. I love this story, there's a lot of suspense in it. Keep up the great work!
Aw I think he was just trying to make her jelous by saying what he did, and now she's going out with stupid..Tony. Pft..Jareds better...^_^ Sorry I'm rambling. I love this story, there's a lot of suspense in it. Keep up the great work!
6/29/2009 c2 XxSCENEandHEARDxX
Please update soon! Also, 34 D and a size 7? That's gotta hurt her back.
Please update soon! Also, 34 D and a size 7? That's gotta hurt her back.
6/18/2009 c1 XxSCENEandHEARDxX
I kind of like the other one better, it was more detailed in some areas where this one isn't. Then again, this one is more detailed in the areas that the other one wasn't. Try and comebine the two. Then this story will be, GREAT! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter, if there is one I mean ^_^
I kind of like the other one better, it was more detailed in some areas where this one isn't. Then again, this one is more detailed in the areas that the other one wasn't. Try and comebine the two. Then this story will be, GREAT! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter, if there is one I mean ^_^