for He Loves Me Not6/22/2009 c2 KiDatHearT
I'm always too lazy to sign in. :P
I've been a big fan of your writing since before you deleted them. I just recently discovered what happened, and I'm glad everything turned out for the best!
I've been reading your new Lifestyles, and yes, it's much, much more well-written. I figured that, since I love that one so much, I should try out your other stories. And I'm glad I did! :)
I really like this story, quite possibly more than I do Lifestyles. I've never really considered the story from the cheerleader girlfriend's pov, maybe because she was always made out to be the bitch everyone hoped would die. I love how she isn't like that here. She's actually a genuinely nice person.
Aahh! I can't wait to read more! Update soon. :))
Hugs, Emi
I'm always too lazy to sign in. :P
I've been a big fan of your writing since before you deleted them. I just recently discovered what happened, and I'm glad everything turned out for the best!
I've been reading your new Lifestyles, and yes, it's much, much more well-written. I figured that, since I love that one so much, I should try out your other stories. And I'm glad I did! :)
I really like this story, quite possibly more than I do Lifestyles. I've never really considered the story from the cheerleader girlfriend's pov, maybe because she was always made out to be the bitch everyone hoped would die. I love how she isn't like that here. She's actually a genuinely nice person.
Aahh! I can't wait to read more! Update soon. :))
Hugs, Emi
6/20/2009 c2 Ren
This is so cool! I love how you are telling this story from the "opposite" perspective. You are de-clicheing the main character. It's so refreshing and fun to read. Please continue soon!
This is so cool! I love how you are telling this story from the "opposite" perspective. You are de-clicheing the main character. It's so refreshing and fun to read. Please continue soon!
6/20/2009 c2 999FloatingFatCats
I feel so bad for her. Why would Chloe glare at her if she already had Bobby? Maggie May is so nice, and the way she's portrayed is so different.Keep writing!:)
I feel so bad for her. Why would Chloe glare at her if she already had Bobby? Maggie May is so nice, and the way she's portrayed is so different.Keep writing!:)
6/20/2009 c2 maskedvalentine
I like Maggie! :) She seems really sweet... compared to other stories about the popular girl being mean/bitchy/blah3.
Please update soon! This story is awesome.
I like Maggie! :) She seems really sweet... compared to other stories about the popular girl being mean/bitchy/blah3.
Please update soon! This story is awesome.
6/20/2009 c2 
16Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic
can she please get that he's not just kissing her as a revenge ploy? I know, I know, it's way too much to ask. But PLEASE?
Ok, all whining aside, great update!
m
16Midge-The-Hopeless-Romanticcan she please get that he's not just kissing her as a revenge ploy? I know, I know, it's way too much to ask. But PLEASE?
Ok, all whining aside, great update!
m
6/20/2009 c2 hezja
ooh i love it i love it love it, i was a bit iffy at the summary buut youve turned maggie into a very sincere main character :D i love it :D
ooh i love it i love it love it, i was a bit iffy at the summary buut youve turned maggie into a very sincere main character :D i love it :D
6/20/2009 c2 Venus Smurf
I hate logging in. It's against my religion...or will be, when I form my own church that doesn't allow for logging into anything. Except when I want to.
Anyway, blasphemy aside, this was BEAUTIFUL. Beautifully written, beautifully scripted, and I sense the happy ending coming! I'm so unbelievably grateful that you didn't let her hole up in her room, crying her heart out. She's a great character, and I'm truly enjoying this.
More, please?
I hate logging in. It's against my religion...or will be, when I form my own church that doesn't allow for logging into anything. Except when I want to.
Anyway, blasphemy aside, this was BEAUTIFUL. Beautifully written, beautifully scripted, and I sense the happy ending coming! I'm so unbelievably grateful that you didn't let her hole up in her room, crying her heart out. She's a great character, and I'm truly enjoying this.
More, please?
6/19/2009 c2 2pretitiful
haha. thanks for loving my name. my friend and i were messing around and we came up with pretitiful, so ever since then that name has been my online name haha.
and yes, this perspective is dead set awesome. I think too many people automically assume that the beautiful blond hair blue eyed girls are bitches but srsly, i know the pretitist blondes and trust me, there like the nicest people ever. Also, alot of stories are sterotypical but this story, maggie is really down to earth and not some manipulative bitch. She's generous and too nice to have her heart crushed. But its good that someone as good as a writer like you is finally exploring the wonderous world of Maggie the cheerleader. and Chloe is sure a character. she doesn't seem like those shy girls who are the protagnist in the story where they get with the popular dude. She's seems much different and in my opinion, if you write some part of Chloe's mindset it will really add emphasis and drama to your story.
When you finish this story, maybe you should write a story about Bobby and Chloe to see what really went behind their relationship.
anyway, enough with me babbling. I loved the chapter and Tommy is sure a true friend :)
2pretitifulhaha. thanks for loving my name. my friend and i were messing around and we came up with pretitiful, so ever since then that name has been my online name haha.
and yes, this perspective is dead set awesome. I think too many people automically assume that the beautiful blond hair blue eyed girls are bitches but srsly, i know the pretitist blondes and trust me, there like the nicest people ever. Also, alot of stories are sterotypical but this story, maggie is really down to earth and not some manipulative bitch. She's generous and too nice to have her heart crushed. But its good that someone as good as a writer like you is finally exploring the wonderous world of Maggie the cheerleader. and Chloe is sure a character. she doesn't seem like those shy girls who are the protagnist in the story where they get with the popular dude. She's seems much different and in my opinion, if you write some part of Chloe's mindset it will really add emphasis and drama to your story.
When you finish this story, maybe you should write a story about Bobby and Chloe to see what really went behind their relationship.
anyway, enough with me babbling. I loved the chapter and Tommy is sure a true friend :)
6/19/2009 c2 2D Cup
OH MY GOSH i LOVE your story! Please Please Please update soon! I love the type of stories that aren't so cliche because usually it's ALWAYS the other way around and I'm starting to get tired of it. Again, LOVE your story :D
2D CupOH MY GOSH i LOVE your story! Please Please Please update soon! I love the type of stories that aren't so cliche because usually it's ALWAYS the other way around and I'm starting to get tired of it. Again, LOVE your story :D
6/19/2009 c2 4MaPluie
This is really something new and I've never read something like this. It's nice to see something different and a totally new perspective. I'll be waiting for your updates. :)
4MaPluieThis is really something new and I've never read something like this. It's nice to see something different and a totally new perspective. I'll be waiting for your updates. :)
6/19/2009 c2 5moony2
I know most everyone is going to disagree with me on this, but this kind of story is best kept as a one shot (which you said was your original intent). I think the longer you draw it out the more the meaning will be lost. Still, give the readers what they want I guess. Your talent is worth checking out any which way.
Moony
5moony2I know most everyone is going to disagree with me on this, but this kind of story is best kept as a one shot (which you said was your original intent). I think the longer you draw it out the more the meaning will be lost. Still, give the readers what they want I guess. Your talent is worth checking out any which way.
Moony