for He Loves Me Not6/19/2009 c2 
7awaiting.rain
“Sugar, don’t you worry. Right now, Socastee High is just like a fish bowl. Bobby’s just a big fish, where you, my dear, are the most beautiful mermaid princess in all the seven seas.”
Super cute line.
Tommy is a cutie.
I'm glad we get to see the other side's point of view. The bitch isn't always a bitch.
7awaiting.rain“Sugar, don’t you worry. Right now, Socastee High is just like a fish bowl. Bobby’s just a big fish, where you, my dear, are the most beautiful mermaid princess in all the seven seas.”
Super cute line.
Tommy is a cutie.
I'm glad we get to see the other side's point of view. The bitch isn't always a bitch.
6/19/2009 c2 1Julia Nathan
OMG! OMG! I sound like an air-head but OMG! Amazing chapter. Seriously I love the ending, getting even is always a great idea... :) I kinda hate Chloe... I mean really she has no reason to be so rude to Maggie, she's not the one who stole someone else's boyfriend. Gr... lol Loved this chapter and so can't wait for more.
1Julia NathanOMG! OMG! I sound like an air-head but OMG! Amazing chapter. Seriously I love the ending, getting even is always a great idea... :) I kinda hate Chloe... I mean really she has no reason to be so rude to Maggie, she's not the one who stole someone else's boyfriend. Gr... lol Loved this chapter and so can't wait for more.
6/19/2009 c1 Skive
Definetly continue,
I want to see Maggie get her happy ending!
I love reading these kind of stories
because the cheerleader isn't just a shallow
character that's two dimensional
and all the country added in is cute
Definetly continue,
I want to see Maggie get her happy ending!
I love reading these kind of stories
because the cheerleader isn't just a shallow
character that's two dimensional
and all the country added in is cute
6/19/2009 c1 4AngelofArtemis
Most definitely continue.
I will be very interested in seeing how this develops. I've never heard of a story from THIS point of view before, and to be honest, I completely love it!
Good job! I look forward to reading more ;-)
4AngelofArtemisMost definitely continue.
I will be very interested in seeing how this develops. I've never heard of a story from THIS point of view before, and to be honest, I completely love it!
Good job! I look forward to reading more ;-)
6/19/2009 c1 one way ticket
continue !
it's nice to see the other point of view, and i think Maggie being nice all everything is different, but good.
continue !
it's nice to see the other point of view, and i think Maggie being nice all everything is different, but good.
6/19/2009 c1 2pretitiful
omg, that's so sad. and reading and seeing from the cheerleader's perspective is completely different and it really enables you to see two sides. like they say,'there's always two sides to a story.'
i always liked stories where the hot, popular boys went for the emo/loner girl whatever but now, reading from the cheerleader point of view it makes you see things completely different. or maybe its simply because she's the protagonist in this story. either way, this story i think (if you continue) is going to be dead set awesome.
well done!
2pretitifulomg, that's so sad. and reading and seeing from the cheerleader's perspective is completely different and it really enables you to see two sides. like they say,'there's always two sides to a story.'
i always liked stories where the hot, popular boys went for the emo/loner girl whatever but now, reading from the cheerleader point of view it makes you see things completely different. or maybe its simply because she's the protagonist in this story. either way, this story i think (if you continue) is going to be dead set awesome.
well done!
6/19/2009 c1 iiHEARTyuu
Hello,
Wow, I really like the idea for this story. It's so true that we all love to hate the cheerleader or the 'other woman' even though she should truly be the only one. I guess it's usually easy to hate her as she tends to be mean in other stories. I like the fact that Maggie seems down-to-earth. I'm excited to see how this story progresses. I was just wondering, how much time passed throughout this chapter? Cause it seemed kind of fast. Well update soon please!
Hello,
Wow, I really like the idea for this story. It's so true that we all love to hate the cheerleader or the 'other woman' even though she should truly be the only one. I guess it's usually easy to hate her as she tends to be mean in other stories. I like the fact that Maggie seems down-to-earth. I'm excited to see how this story progresses. I was just wondering, how much time passed throughout this chapter? Cause it seemed kind of fast. Well update soon please!
6/18/2009 c1 3Venus Smurf1
You absolutely HAVE to continue this! There's obviously more to be written, and you can't leave us hanging like that! Please, please write more! I know that some writers like to inject reality into their stories, but there are already enough sad endings as it is. Give her at least the potential for a happy one, please?
3Venus Smurf1You absolutely HAVE to continue this! There's obviously more to be written, and you can't leave us hanging like that! Please, please write more! I know that some writers like to inject reality into their stories, but there are already enough sad endings as it is. Give her at least the potential for a happy one, please?
6/18/2009 c1 30Nuttyginger
Oh continue. i love it cos no one ever tells the story from the POV of the dumpee and everyone thinks its OK she was dumped because she is a bitch, whether or not she is a bitch!
Look forward to it if you continue.
Nutty
30NuttygingerOh continue. i love it cos no one ever tells the story from the POV of the dumpee and everyone thinks its OK she was dumped because she is a bitch, whether or not she is a bitch!
Look forward to it if you continue.
Nutty
6/18/2009 c1 1Julia Nathan
Oh my god I love this idea you have. It's a wonder that no one's considered the cherleader's side to it all. You should definitely continue this. You built a solid foundation, now it's time to do the rest! This was amazing and I hope you'll continue it.
1Julia NathanOh my god I love this idea you have. It's a wonder that no one's considered the cherleader's side to it all. You should definitely continue this. You built a solid foundation, now it's time to do the rest! This was amazing and I hope you'll continue it.