
6/18/2009 c1
4jessnutsss
Wow. I like this story a lot. I've always wondered the same thing, and it's nice to read something like this here in Fiction press. The stereotype cheerleader who actually has a soul. Good work!

Wow. I like this story a lot. I've always wondered the same thing, and it's nice to read something like this here in Fiction press. The stereotype cheerleader who actually has a soul. Good work!
6/18/2009 c1
2angelbymistake
Oh yes! Do an aftermath! Maggie sounds like a nice girl and I feel like this story would be different :) I like it!

Oh yes! Do an aftermath! Maggie sounds like a nice girl and I feel like this story would be different :) I like it!
6/18/2009 c1
2abc123 chewy
its sounds very interesting and I say CONTINUE
its great to the the different version... the not so cliche version but yet... still cliche. =P
=]

its sounds very interesting and I say CONTINUE
its great to the the different version... the not so cliche version but yet... still cliche. =P
=]
6/18/2009 c1
4Katie-Maude
Oh, oh, please continue it. It's good as a one-shot, don't get me wrong. I mean, I love the fact that it shows you inside the head of the girl usually considered the bitch in clichéd stories and explains how things could misunderstood. I love that. But there's just so much more to the story. I don't know how to explain it, but Maggie needs her happy ending, or at least as close to it as she can get. I do hope you continue this.

Oh, oh, please continue it. It's good as a one-shot, don't get me wrong. I mean, I love the fact that it shows you inside the head of the girl usually considered the bitch in clichéd stories and explains how things could misunderstood. I love that. But there's just so much more to the story. I don't know how to explain it, but Maggie needs her happy ending, or at least as close to it as she can get. I do hope you continue this.