for Mafia Runner8/22/2009 c10 
3CreativeChick233
ha, i absoloutely love this chapter!
if only afton could hold his ground!
but if i had me a lucian, im shure i wouldn't be able too either! lol
glad lucian didn't ask afton to be the boss,
cause that would have ruin the moment,
i was so glad when i got the email about you updating! lol
favorite story thus far on here! [;
3CreativeChick233ha, i absoloutely love this chapter!
if only afton could hold his ground!
but if i had me a lucian, im shure i wouldn't be able too either! lol
glad lucian didn't ask afton to be the boss,
cause that would have ruin the moment,
i was so glad when i got the email about you updating! lol
favorite story thus far on here! [;
8/22/2009 c10 greengarbage
Aww...!
This was worth the wait.
Aww...!
This was worth the wait.
8/22/2009 c10 Barkers3
Aww, I liked this chapter. it was pretty sweet. I really like how Afton takes no shit from lucian :D Very cool.
Aww, I liked this chapter. it was pretty sweet. I really like how Afton takes no shit from lucian :D Very cool.
8/22/2009 c10 2hazza1508
really enjoyed this chapter and cant wait for afton to meet lucians family so update update update plz asap
2hazza1508really enjoyed this chapter and cant wait for afton to meet lucians family so update update update plz asap
8/22/2009 c10 2That Day Is Mine
Aw. Oh, this was SO cute! _ Adorable, adorable! But I can't wait until Afton meets the 'rents. And does Lucian's mum like Afton? I hope so. It would kinda suck if they ALL hated him.
AND AGAIN, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. So fluffy. :3 You're the best :hearts:
T.D. Is Mine
2That Day Is MineAw. Oh, this was SO cute! _ Adorable, adorable! But I can't wait until Afton meets the 'rents. And does Lucian's mum like Afton? I hope so. It would kinda suck if they ALL hated him.
AND AGAIN, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. So fluffy. :3 You're the best :hearts:
T.D. Is Mine
8/19/2009 c9 oo
getting tense...
alot of big decisions coming.
getting tense...
alot of big decisions coming.
8/17/2009 c9 Gwengwel
I forgot to review! Bad Gwen, bad. Sorry!
Ho, I love your story. Everything. I want to be more constrictive and help to improve your story, but I can't find something bad to say. I like how they make progress, how they can talk, all your personage (even his father, yep), that everything's not perfect in there life.
Afton can be jealous?
The father, I just wanted to see his face. mouahhahaha! Busted!
A lot of explication will be asked.
The mural was a cute idea but the poor artist, paint in this condition...loll
Gwen
I forgot to review! Bad Gwen, bad. Sorry!
Ho, I love your story. Everything. I want to be more constrictive and help to improve your story, but I can't find something bad to say. I like how they make progress, how they can talk, all your personage (even his father, yep), that everything's not perfect in there life.
Afton can be jealous?
The father, I just wanted to see his face. mouahhahaha! Busted!
A lot of explication will be asked.
The mural was a cute idea but the poor artist, paint in this condition...loll
Gwen
8/15/2009 c9 acidrops
Great chapter I guess this means he's finaly out of the closet. Waiting for the next ;)
Great chapter I guess this means he's finaly out of the closet. Waiting for the next ;)
8/13/2009 c9 5TheLadyPendragon
Man, you're just making me more curious! I can't wait to meet (in a metaphorical sense) Lucian's family. XD I'm sure Afton, being spitfire as Lucian likes to call him, will eventually prove his strength and win their respect. :)
I don't know why, but I thought Lucian's POV was funny, especially how he scared that artist into making that mural. XD I forget sometimes how he's an underboss (and scary) when he's being all sweet with Afton. :3
5TheLadyPendragonMan, you're just making me more curious! I can't wait to meet (in a metaphorical sense) Lucian's family. XD I'm sure Afton, being spitfire as Lucian likes to call him, will eventually prove his strength and win their respect. :)
I don't know why, but I thought Lucian's POV was funny, especially how he scared that artist into making that mural. XD I forget sometimes how he's an underboss (and scary) when he's being all sweet with Afton. :3
8/12/2009 c9 2Ominous Rain
damn. I know afton is still going to get a earful or something from his father. his mother, eh , not so much. hm Lucian's family won't like afton that much will they? oh i smell big drama!
2Ominous Raindamn. I know afton is still going to get a earful or something from his father. his mother, eh , not so much. hm Lucian's family won't like afton that much will they? oh i smell big drama!
8/12/2009 c9 1The association of Young Folks
:O Yyayayayayyayayayyayay You updated :D This chapter made me grin like a total loon because Lucian was an awesome and sexy. :D *laugh* Update soon ^^
1The association of Young Folks:O Yyayayayayyayayayyayay You updated :D This chapter made me grin like a total loon because Lucian was an awesome and sexy. :D *laugh* Update soon ^^
8/12/2009 c9 Thecowonthebox
I can't wait for the next chapter !
For the weekend and for the meeting with Lucian's father and his sibling ! AAHHR ! Love this story ! It's SO great !
Thanks for sharing...
I can't wait for the next chapter !
For the weekend and for the meeting with Lucian's father and his sibling ! AAHHR ! Love this story ! It's SO great !
Thanks for sharing...
8/11/2009 c9 bossyfoodshield
i really really really love your story! oh please update again... i can't wait for things to progress even further for our two characters :) and it's great that you gave a short pov on lucian, and they way you wrote it does still keep an air of mystery about him... all the readers could get from it is that he's genuinely interested in afton and that he wants him as his life partner... but we've already figured that, so he still remains an enigma... it's good.. it's really good
i really really really love your story! oh please update again... i can't wait for things to progress even further for our two characters :) and it's great that you gave a short pov on lucian, and they way you wrote it does still keep an air of mystery about him... all the readers could get from it is that he's genuinely interested in afton and that he wants him as his life partner... but we've already figured that, so he still remains an enigma... it's good.. it's really good
8/11/2009 c9 23frogs of war
"no reason once so ever" should be 'no reason whatsoever', I think.
It is entertaining to see just how much Lucian holds back, but it must be hard not to reveal so much that it breaks the tension of who he is and what he really wants.
23frogs of war"no reason once so ever" should be 'no reason whatsoever', I think.
It is entertaining to see just how much Lucian holds back, but it must be hard not to reveal so much that it breaks the tension of who he is and what he really wants.