for Mafia Runner1/25/2014 c31 unjfdy
I hope that you update soon, for this is one of my favorite stories on fictionpress, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
You're a really talentet writer, and I have reread this story atleast twice already :)
I hope that you update soon, for this is one of my favorite stories on fictionpress, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
You're a really talentet writer, and I have reread this story atleast twice already :)
1/4/2014 c31 Guest
Please don't abandon this story, if you're not dead, can you give us an update on when it's going to at least?
Please don't abandon this story, if you're not dead, can you give us an update on when it's going to at least?
12/10/2013 c31 Guest
Come back
Come back
12/6/2013 c31 Guest
I'm begging you to finish
I'm begging you to finish
11/10/2013 c31 Koshka
I just love the father-son things going on between Afton and Marcus in this chap-it's really sweet :) Thanks for writing!
I just love the father-son things going on between Afton and Marcus in this chap-it's really sweet :) Thanks for writing!
11/9/2013 c31 Guest
Please, please, please finish this! You're almost there!
Please, please, please finish this! You're almost there!
11/4/2013 c1 Nightesaur
I understand that real life's got you. I do. I'm just worried that you might be leaning on never finishing this story. Take as many years as you want so, please finish it!
I understand that real life's got you. I do. I'm just worried that you might be leaning on never finishing this story. Take as many years as you want so, please finish it!
310/11/2013 c31 Talysse
The daddy ís cool at the end!
Good act guys!
How will the meeting with the Ashton family be and their future?
The daddy ís cool at the end!
Good act guys!
How will the meeting with the Ashton family be and their future?
10/10/2013 c31 Guest
OH MY GOODNESS ! OHH EMM GEE ! THIS IS THE BEST 'MAFIA' GENRED STORY I HAD EVER READ IN MY 16 YEARS OF LIVING ! (in fact...hehe...this is my first..._)/i'd only get on my phone to search and read 'Gay', 'BL', 'Yaoi'-genred fanfics...and ut was not always a success as i'd always find 'Straight' ones on Gangsters, Yakuza, Mafia, Murderer...even Rapist...but you've made the miracle come true..*air kisses*/ I really love this fiction ! I cant thank you enough for coming up with such a wonderful idea and uploading it up for us, wonderful loyal fans ! I hope, no. I know Chapter 31 is not the last. And i really hope you'll make a sequeal out of it. Its really lovely. And..i kind of hope Afton..could somehow...accept Marcus as his padre...it would be a miracle. I can't get this story out of my mind ! I even thought of it while doing my major examination for the past 3 days ! I would rush to my bag pack once the exams finishes and immediately get my phone out to continue reading. Thus i want to say that i really, really love you for uploading this up. Your constant ideas of the chapters has made me wait patiently for the upcoming chapter. I await. Thank you very much ! Iam really an undying fan of you, your ideas and this fanfic !
OH MY GOODNESS ! OHH EMM GEE ! THIS IS THE BEST 'MAFIA' GENRED STORY I HAD EVER READ IN MY 16 YEARS OF LIVING ! (in fact...hehe...this is my first..._)/i'd only get on my phone to search and read 'Gay', 'BL', 'Yaoi'-genred fanfics...and ut was not always a success as i'd always find 'Straight' ones on Gangsters, Yakuza, Mafia, Murderer...even Rapist...but you've made the miracle come true..*air kisses*/ I really love this fiction ! I cant thank you enough for coming up with such a wonderful idea and uploading it up for us, wonderful loyal fans ! I hope, no. I know Chapter 31 is not the last. And i really hope you'll make a sequeal out of it. Its really lovely. And..i kind of hope Afton..could somehow...accept Marcus as his padre...it would be a miracle. I can't get this story out of my mind ! I even thought of it while doing my major examination for the past 3 days ! I would rush to my bag pack once the exams finishes and immediately get my phone out to continue reading. Thus i want to say that i really, really love you for uploading this up. Your constant ideas of the chapters has made me wait patiently for the upcoming chapter. I await. Thank you very much ! Iam really an undying fan of you, your ideas and this fanfic !
10/10/2013 c31 Nightesaur
Cannot wait for next update! I'm going to miss Afton and Lucian so hard. I'll accidentally click on this story every now and then and sigh. It was such a good story. I read it through twice. I normally can't stand reading a story twice, but wow. So great!
Cannot wait for next update! I'm going to miss Afton and Lucian so hard. I'll accidentally click on this story every now and then and sigh. It was such a good story. I read it through twice. I normally can't stand reading a story twice, but wow. So great!
10/6/2013 c31 calamity jane
Omg that was freakin' awesome! I don't want to see this story end, but I can't wait to find out how you're gonna wrap things up. I think you're one of the best writers I've read here on FP and hope you don't wait too long to start something new.
Omg that was freakin' awesome! I don't want to see this story end, but I can't wait to find out how you're gonna wrap things up. I think you're one of the best writers I've read here on FP and hope you don't wait too long to start something new.