
8/14/2013 c31 ElleRachelle
Great story...I hope there's a sequel after you finish wrapping things up.
Great story...I hope there's a sequel after you finish wrapping things up.
8/13/2013 c31 Guest
Wonderful! I was so very impressed with Afton in this, his bravery and composure were amazing considering he is like seconds away from breaking down about everything. I am so happy that he found a way to take Gabriele down, without more bloodshed. And he got Lucian ;) I like that you made their future have the possibility of the Mafia in it. I don't really like the idea of them breaking laws and being in constant danger, but I also feel that Lucian needs something to make his life not mundane. Hopefully the Conti family is not a vicious murdering drug-trafficking mafia family. I hope that we finally get to see Afton's breakdown and how Lucian will help him through it. It is disturbing that he feels so scared and empty, but just has to keep ignoring it in order to hold their lives together, poor Afton :( Anyway, amazing update! I really hope the next one comes soon, I can't wait to see the end to this amazing story!
Wonderful! I was so very impressed with Afton in this, his bravery and composure were amazing considering he is like seconds away from breaking down about everything. I am so happy that he found a way to take Gabriele down, without more bloodshed. And he got Lucian ;) I like that you made their future have the possibility of the Mafia in it. I don't really like the idea of them breaking laws and being in constant danger, but I also feel that Lucian needs something to make his life not mundane. Hopefully the Conti family is not a vicious murdering drug-trafficking mafia family. I hope that we finally get to see Afton's breakdown and how Lucian will help him through it. It is disturbing that he feels so scared and empty, but just has to keep ignoring it in order to hold their lives together, poor Afton :( Anyway, amazing update! I really hope the next one comes soon, I can't wait to see the end to this amazing story!
8/12/2013 c31 Guest
I am so happy that you continue this story. Your story, characters are so amazing. I check every day, hoping for a update. I was so happy to see one! I will be sad to see this story end, but on the other hand, i can't want to find out the ending. Hopefully it will be happy one. and perhaps there will be a sequel if I may be so bold. thank you again for sharing your amazing hard work with us!
and thank you for the visuals... I love the pictures you provided! now alfon and Lucian will be even more vivid in my mind. Thank you again!
I am so happy that you continue this story. Your story, characters are so amazing. I check every day, hoping for a update. I was so happy to see one! I will be sad to see this story end, but on the other hand, i can't want to find out the ending. Hopefully it will be happy one. and perhaps there will be a sequel if I may be so bold. thank you again for sharing your amazing hard work with us!
and thank you for the visuals... I love the pictures you provided! now alfon and Lucian will be even more vivid in my mind. Thank you again!
8/12/2013 c31 chibikodo
Oh Afton- are you sure you're not going to somehow end up in the mafia with your biological father? Hah
I hope that in the future Afton and Lucian will visit Contessa and Lucian's siblings. :) Will there really be a (somewhat) happily ever after?
Oh Afton- are you sure you're not going to somehow end up in the mafia with your biological father? Hah
I hope that in the future Afton and Lucian will visit Contessa and Lucian's siblings. :) Will there really be a (somewhat) happily ever after?
8/12/2013 c31 thecowonthebox
Update ! :) Thank you !
So, it's almost the end... So sad...
I hope Afton and Lucian will meet again very soon.
I think Marcus like his son. He just doesn't know how to show it.
Well, he's a gangster !
Update ! :) Thank you !
So, it's almost the end... So sad...
I hope Afton and Lucian will meet again very soon.
I think Marcus like his son. He just doesn't know how to show it.
Well, he's a gangster !
8/12/2013 c31 Fairy4u
Amazing chapter! I don't want this story to end. But then again, I'll be happy on looking forward reading new stories from you. Thank you for sharing them with us.
Amazing chapter! I don't want this story to end. But then again, I'll be happy on looking forward reading new stories from you. Thank you for sharing them with us.
8/12/2013 c31
5Blueyes57
what an unexpected surprise! thank you! lol Theres more to Afton than he knows just like most of us. We don't know what we can "handle" until we're put in that situation and we come out the other side a little more stronger and for some a bit more mature.

what an unexpected surprise! thank you! lol Theres more to Afton than he knows just like most of us. We don't know what we can "handle" until we're put in that situation and we come out the other side a little more stronger and for some a bit more mature.
8/12/2013 c31 Guest
Awesome!
Awesome!
8/12/2013 c31 LooznMaMind
Finally! I Thought you'd gotten yourself thrown in jail or something. Glad Gabriele has been taken care of. On to the next chapter!
Finally! I Thought you'd gotten yourself thrown in jail or something. Glad Gabriele has been taken care of. On to the next chapter!
8/11/2013 c31 bellehawk
It has been too long. I guess I will start reading it from the beginning once again. I wish you could update more often because I always loved reading your stories.
It has been too long. I guess I will start reading it from the beginning once again. I wish you could update more often because I always loved reading your stories.
8/11/2013 c31 LiveLoveRead95
This story is completely addicting. There is never a boring moment I an always on edge. I live this story so much please wrote a sequel I simply live everything about it.
This story is completely addicting. There is never a boring moment I an always on edge. I live this story so much please wrote a sequel I simply live everything about it.
8/11/2013 c31 Kuro no shigemi
I love you so much this chapter was as home •
I love you so much this chapter was as home •
8/11/2013 c31 brightsun89
I love this fic! I can't believe that its almost over! I'm praying that you decide to do a sequel!? :) I think that you are an awesome writer!
I love this fic! I can't believe that its almost over! I'm praying that you decide to do a sequel!? :) I think that you are an awesome writer!
8/11/2013 c31 V
Awesome chapter. Well worth the wait. :). I'll be sad to see it end but I also can't wait to see how you wrap it all up. Afton kicked ass! I love your character development. Everyone always seems so believable. That seems hard to find these days. Keep up the awesome work!
Awesome chapter. Well worth the wait. :). I'll be sad to see it end but I also can't wait to see how you wrap it all up. Afton kicked ass! I love your character development. Everyone always seems so believable. That seems hard to find these days. Keep up the awesome work!