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5/4 c1 Guest
That was hilarious. James proved his worth in the end
9/24/2019 c1 j0rja
This is so cute and funny!
10/5/2018 c1 13Shailaputri
It is real fun to read it..
11/16/2016 c1 otakuami111
The last line of this story totally perfect! :-)
9/20/2015 c1 9TotoDaDog
That. was. incredible.
7/10/2015 c1 Blaze
THIS IS FREAKING HILARIOUS! LOVE IT
3/27/2015 c1 Red
This was written very well! It actually made me smile really stupidly haha please write mooooore xx
8/31/2014 c1 Julietish
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, this review was written by a judge: This one-shot belongs in the history books as the first story in a male's POV that I've read on FictionPress. I know that there are more out there, but I tend to shy away from the unfamiliar; however, this one made me want to read more of them.
It's about Bryan, who, on a dare, is in a public library photocopying his rear end (butt-copying, he dubs it). His friend, James, is the one who dared him to do so and put the picture up at school for all to see come Monday morning. Of course, as fate would have it, Bryan's long-time crush (he calls her "The One") catches him in the act, thus ensuing humiliation, hilarity, and those scenes that make you go awww!

In the "Why You Like It" portion of the suggestion form (which, if you were wondering, the judges totally take into account), the suggestor said the voice sounds female-ish at times, which I guess I can understand, but I never personally got that idea while reading it. Although, I'm not a guy so I could be totally wrong about that. Masculine or not, the voice was funny, witty, realistic, and sweet. The plot was original but not unbelievable; the characters were likable and quirky; the dialogue was easy to imagine. I loved the ending because it was vague and completely open-ended, which is very hard to pull off in a satisfying way. Picture Perfect definitely sets itself apart from other one-shots and even full-length stories on FictionPress with its originality, silliness, and unique charm.
4/28/2014 c1 myst77
Made me smile. I like your sense of humour.
11/10/2013 c1 1APassionForReadingAndWriting
Funny story, I love it :D
8/7/2013 c1 Dominique Diane
Aww, so cute! I totally loved it :) It was a great idea posting the photocopy in her locker!
Regards,
Diane.
2/28/2013 c1 10A Different Kind of Yellow
Haha great! What is TaD anyway?
1/19/2013 c1 1my princess ending
I was honestly ready to just stop reading it when Bryan read the note but then, you made it all better! Quite thankful for that. I really liked the plot and I was about to write a fiction from a guy's point of view and this helped. Thanks.(:

xoxo,
JustWish
1/4/2013 c1 katmelnyk
OMG Adorable! Update soon!
12/25/2012 c1 26Felix Golden
THIS IS SOOOOOO FUNNY I BURST OUT LAUGHING! "Prince Charming called. He wants his boxers back." Genius!
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