for Unable To Stay, Unwilling To Leave1/19/2013 c1 Guest
You don't "where" clothing. You wear them.
You don't "where" clothing. You wear them.
12/20/2009 c15 
3dontneedyou
I can't really even remember what this story was about, lol. But it was on my alerts. How long have you updated last? Anyways, this is a good chapter anyway. Loved it! ;)
-dontneedyou
3dontneedyouI can't really even remember what this story was about, lol. But it was on my alerts. How long have you updated last? Anyways, this is a good chapter anyway. Loved it! ;)
-dontneedyou
12/20/2009 c15 4ashalayy aka freddi d
aw how touching! moments like this always make me feel all bubbly and warm inside. lolz, happy holidays to you too!
4ashalayy aka freddi daw how touching! moments like this always make me feel all bubbly and warm inside. lolz, happy holidays to you too!
12/19/2009 c15 2Kaileena Lee
Omg that is so sweet[:
Thanks a million for updating I forgot how much I enjoyed reading this!
Anyways if you don't update before the holidays, I hope you have a very merry christmas, as I am assuming you celebrate; forgive me if my assuptions are wrong!
Try to update soon; I know it's busy this time of the year(:
2Kaileena LeeOmg that is so sweet[:
Thanks a million for updating I forgot how much I enjoyed reading this!
Anyways if you don't update before the holidays, I hope you have a very merry christmas, as I am assuming you celebrate; forgive me if my assuptions are wrong!
Try to update soon; I know it's busy this time of the year(:
9/5/2009 c14 2ishani acuinatum.ashley
hey,
great story!i really like it...definitely gonna read more of it...do update soon...
ishani
xx
2ishani acuinatum.ashleyhey,
great story!i really like it...definitely gonna read more of it...do update soon...
ishani
xx
9/4/2009 c14 4ashalayy aka freddi d
AH! is the baby coming early? or maybe it's juts kicking really hard? dUn dun dun!
4ashalayy aka freddi dAH! is the baby coming early? or maybe it's juts kicking really hard? dUn dun dun!
9/4/2009 c14 2Kaileena Lee
Oh my god oh myy godd! Oh no! Wowee this is great(: please please update quick!:)
2Kaileena LeeOh my god oh myy godd! Oh no! Wowee this is great(: please please update quick!:)
9/3/2009 c13 Kaileena Lee
Awhh geez, Kevin is such a great guy(: love his fam bam and everything(: please update soon!
Awhh geez, Kevin is such a great guy(: love his fam bam and everything(: please update soon!
9/2/2009 c13 Cecilia A
Again, loved it. But everything still seems to be one big chunk of dialogue. Try to include more of the character's thoughts, more of her feelings. What she thinks about the people around her, the places she's in.
-Harlow
Again, loved it. But everything still seems to be one big chunk of dialogue. Try to include more of the character's thoughts, more of her feelings. What she thinks about the people around her, the places she's in.
-Harlow