for It's a Long Way Down9/12/2012 c1 Guest
I really loved this story :3. And it's strange really, my friend Shalamari just told me today that she named her baby sister Neveah xD. Oh, I just love how the things I see or hear, they later come up in stories. Anyway, enough of my short rambling...
I really loved this story :3. And it's strange really, my friend Shalamari just told me today that she named her baby sister Neveah xD. Oh, I just love how the things I see or hear, they later come up in stories. Anyway, enough of my short rambling...
7/16/2010 c1 
11R. Tist
Oh, how sweet! And that WOULD make a good story to tell their children, won't it? :"D I like your style. Humorous, but with that seriousness and realness that I like to read in stories.
11R. TistOh, how sweet! And that WOULD make a good story to tell their children, won't it? :"D I like your style. Humorous, but with that seriousness and realness that I like to read in stories.
6/6/2010 c1 3WishmiesterBeta
Usually I don't read stuff like this with all the outfits and boy slapping, but your summary was probably the most interesting one I've ever read in my life. Bee is a kickass name that I wish I could steal and the whole running around naked at the party thing was interesting. You're writing style is amazing. It's so realistic it's almost mind blowing. Makes my writing look like dirt.
So, yeah... This was really good.
3WishmiesterBetaUsually I don't read stuff like this with all the outfits and boy slapping, but your summary was probably the most interesting one I've ever read in my life. Bee is a kickass name that I wish I could steal and the whole running around naked at the party thing was interesting. You're writing style is amazing. It's so realistic it's almost mind blowing. Makes my writing look like dirt.
So, yeah... This was really good.
7/16/2009 c1 5The Red Dress
You...You're amazing. Like JK Rowling amazing. This story was funny...but it was deeper than just that. Honestly, how do you not have a book out when shite like Twilight is loved.
I love you! :D
5The Red DressYou...You're amazing. Like JK Rowling amazing. This story was funny...but it was deeper than just that. Honestly, how do you not have a book out when shite like Twilight is loved.
I love you! :D
6/29/2009 c1 18Jade Q. Dean
Nice story ^^ Though I think I found 2 grammar errors. e.g. Their instead of they're.
18Jade Q. DeanNice story ^^ Though I think I found 2 grammar errors. e.g. Their instead of they're.
6/29/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
Alright so.
I like how you brought depth into what could have been an incredibly shallow story, though at times Bee was a little annoying and shallowish herself. However, I kinda wish you hadn't left us with the "everything-will-be-okay" sorta feeling, because realistically, it might not. :/ I do like the ending, though (them being caught). I would like to point out that I have no idea how she pulled off sexy clown, haha.
I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnAlright so.
I like how you brought depth into what could have been an incredibly shallow story, though at times Bee was a little annoying and shallowish herself. However, I kinda wish you hadn't left us with the "everything-will-be-okay" sorta feeling, because realistically, it might not. :/ I do like the ending, though (them being caught). I would like to point out that I have no idea how she pulled off sexy clown, haha.
I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
6/25/2009 c1 13goldenspork
Oh my God, I would be horrified if someone ever found me on the roof naked. I mean, that's not something you bounce back from.
Neveah, that's a good name. :)
13goldensporkOh my God, I would be horrified if someone ever found me on the roof naked. I mean, that's not something you bounce back from.
Neveah, that's a good name. :)
6/25/2009 c1 7wabam
I really liked this. Liked the plot, though at one point it confused me as to where it would go. it was an awesome read, and I like how you write. very new. Very modern.
7wabamI really liked this. Liked the plot, though at one point it confused me as to where it would go. it was an awesome read, and I like how you write. very new. Very modern.
6/23/2009 c1 8LeaveThePieces
Aw that was very cute! Great story : ) Very emotional and realistic. Good job!
8LeaveThePiecesAw that was very cute! Great story : ) Very emotional and realistic. Good job!
6/23/2009 c1 tomtom18
that was so good!
i know that itss a one shot, but it would be so cool if it was a story (hint-hint)
anyways, im subscribing 2 u so i can get more good stories :)/ one shots
that was so good!
i know that itss a one shot, but it would be so cool if it was a story (hint-hint)
anyways, im subscribing 2 u so i can get more good stories :)/ one shots