for Three Haikus12/19/2009 c1 
82steffxnie
Wonderful haikus. Each gives the reader a different feeling. The expressions are good as well. I like the second one best. Please keep writing! ;)
82steffxnieWonderful haikus. Each gives the reader a different feeling. The expressions are good as well. I like the second one best. Please keep writing! ;)
6/23/2009 c1 121Wishdreamer89
That's pretty..a very dream-like, beautiful quality in the word selection. words like drift and thirsting..you can feel the words
121Wishdreamer89That's pretty..a very dream-like, beautiful quality in the word selection. words like drift and thirsting..you can feel the words
6/23/2009 c1 81Princess-anna57
Beautiful haikus! I love them! I'm a huge fan of connected haikus (and haikus in general!) so your summary instantly caught my eye. I adore the transition from loneliness to hope to happiness, very well done. Keep writing, you have a great gift!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Beautiful haikus! I love them! I'm a huge fan of connected haikus (and haikus in general!) so your summary instantly caught my eye. I adore the transition from loneliness to hope to happiness, very well done. Keep writing, you have a great gift!
~Anna~ ^_^