for Diary Entries of a Hounded Girl6/30/2009 c2 Taylor
Wow, this is really funny, I was crying for some of it, I am on the third chapter now but this is a very very good job for your first third person! I'm really impressed
Wow, this is really funny, I was crying for some of it, I am on the third chapter now but this is a very very good job for your first third person! I'm really impressed
6/30/2009 c5 meduse
AW.
(he totally has a thing for her)
(and she totally likes him back. even though she doesn't know it yet)
♥ this chap. but it broke my heart. NO THEY'RE ALREADY FIGHTING BY CHAPTER 5? *bursts into tears*
*sniffles* can't wait for the next chapter.
~FunkyObsessed
AW.
(he totally has a thing for her)
(and she totally likes him back. even though she doesn't know it yet)
♥ this chap. but it broke my heart. NO THEY'RE ALREADY FIGHTING BY CHAPTER 5? *bursts into tears*
*sniffles* can't wait for the next chapter.
~FunkyObsessed
6/28/2009 c4 
3Amarantis
I can't wait to read more, even if the chapters are shorter than what I usually read. They seem to have the same amount of content anyways.
3AmarantisI can't wait to read more, even if the chapters are shorter than what I usually read. They seem to have the same amount of content anyways.
6/28/2009 c4 9Stahlut
I really really really love this story, she is so funny. And it's really kind of cute the way she assumed that he was gay. It seriously made me laugh. I hope that you update soon.
9StahlutI really really really love this story, she is so funny. And it's really kind of cute the way she assumed that he was gay. It seriously made me laugh. I hope that you update soon.
6/28/2009 c4 factbasedfiction
hey,
i just started to read your storey and i like although im not good at writing reveiws. i think it could be that im a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to writting and even though the story is really REALLY good, i still try to find ways to improve it. and anything that i say is not ment to be taken in offence. its just that your chapters could be a bit longer. thats all i have to critize.
kk
ttyl
Tiff.
hey,
i just started to read your storey and i like although im not good at writing reveiws. i think it could be that im a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to writting and even though the story is really REALLY good, i still try to find ways to improve it. and anything that i say is not ment to be taken in offence. its just that your chapters could be a bit longer. thats all i have to critize.
kk
ttyl
Tiff.
6/28/2009 c4 meduse
OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD.
(i like bruce ;D)
ARGH. POST ANOTHER CHAPTER. I'M LIKE, DYING HERE. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE (look, you've turned me into a whining child . lol)
♥ this chapter
~FODA
OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD.
(i like bruce ;D)
ARGH. POST ANOTHER CHAPTER. I'M LIKE, DYING HERE. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE (look, you've turned me into a whining child . lol)
♥ this chapter
~FODA
6/27/2009 c1 9Narq
Wow, I haven't come across this kind of story before~ great work though, I really got into the mood of reading~
Narq.
9NarqWow, I haven't come across this kind of story before~ great work though, I really got into the mood of reading~
Narq.
6/27/2009 c3 meduse
*sigh* i'm back from like, the longest hiatus ever :D
AND OMG I ♥ THIS STORY :D
and the ending too ;) first kiss, huh?
~can't wait for the next chapter
FunkyObsessed (aka DixieAusten =D)
*sigh* i'm back from like, the longest hiatus ever :D
AND OMG I ♥ THIS STORY :D
and the ending too ;) first kiss, huh?
~can't wait for the next chapter
FunkyObsessed (aka DixieAusten =D)
6/25/2009 c2 8sealednectar
Hey, hey, hey! I've only read two short chapters, but I am already hooked! I was laughing throughout. I wish there was more. Please continue writing, the main character is great and I like her views on everyone. Your writing style is very sharp, succinct, but at the same time allows the reader to form a view of all the characters. Keep writing!
8sealednectarHey, hey, hey! I've only read two short chapters, but I am already hooked! I was laughing throughout. I wish there was more. Please continue writing, the main character is great and I like her views on everyone. Your writing style is very sharp, succinct, but at the same time allows the reader to form a view of all the characters. Keep writing!