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12/15/2009 c1 23thinking.about.thinking
"You can only lose what you gain."

So very true.

thinking.about.thinking
12/14/2009 c1 8andsherose
Aw, Sophie, this is beautiful!

I wanna know where the question ends, though. I feel like there's a line missing, maybe somewhere between

Where new friends warm a heart so cold

and

Find love you'll find pain.

I love it, though! Poignant and sweet.

Francheska
6/29/2009 c1 41Venz0r
I think this is probably the biggest issue with getting close to anyone. We all think about it at one point or another, this poem addresses the issue pretty clearly.

I think the word "Until" stuck out because it doesn't seem to lead anywhere. I could understand "Under", but it doesn't seem to lead anywhere in the poem to me. I see them coming from hills and valleys old, but the laughter isn't doing anything.

Maybe I'm over-thinking. But this is pretty good for the topic it brings up. Definitely meaningful.

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