for Sono Morte7/2/2009 c1 deletety
It was vague and mysterious. I liked the vibe it gave off while reading. Good job.
It was vague and mysterious. I liked the vibe it gave off while reading. Good job.
6/30/2009 c1 
113403 Forbidden
I liked this, the way you kind of made it seem like the reader was an intruder in this scene in a good effect. I must say, Ottavio sounds like a pretty irritating person, but I suppose that works. I like the characters and the way they interact; it makes me want to know more about them. Nice work.
~403F
113403 ForbiddenI liked this, the way you kind of made it seem like the reader was an intruder in this scene in a good effect. I must say, Ottavio sounds like a pretty irritating person, but I suppose that works. I like the characters and the way they interact; it makes me want to know more about them. Nice work.
~403F