for Climb2/20/2010 c1 
612simpleplan13
Thanks for your review awhile back. Sorry it took me so long to return the favor! Oh and join the Review Marathon! (link in my profile)
Ok I like the idea with the format. Making sort of a mountain out of the words works great with the last line. However, I didn't like the repetition. It was way too much. I honestly stopped halfway through and just read the last line. I think maybe making the same shape, but using different words.
612simpleplan13Thanks for your review awhile back. Sorry it took me so long to return the favor! Oh and join the Review Marathon! (link in my profile)
Ok I like the idea with the format. Making sort of a mountain out of the words works great with the last line. However, I didn't like the repetition. It was way too much. I honestly stopped halfway through and just read the last line. I think maybe making the same shape, but using different words.
10/18/2009 c1 8koolkat104
I like the way you wrote this. The pyramid/mountain thing serves a good purpose. Nice message, too.
8koolkat104I like the way you wrote this. The pyramid/mountain thing serves a good purpose. Nice message, too.