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6/30/2009 c1 3Kadekksys
I can see what you meant by the second half being a little shaky. Also, I feel like princesses who need rescuing may cause our hero's heart to be a bit torn. Perhaps I'm about 10 chapters ahead of myself, though :P

As always, interested in more :)
6/30/2009 c1 Wait who am I Oh.Hime
This was sadly and obscenely short (Yes, I know why, but stills). Y'know...I really don't have much to say XD Sorry. I've already told you most of my feelings on this chappie, and while I think that the conversation made more sense in context, the chappie is still overall boring. :( Sorry. But I am looking forward to next chappie. :)

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