for dumpster11/13/2011 c17 themanicurist
You described that feeling perfectly. The restlessness of being in class. I feel the same way. I've skipped too many classes.
You described that feeling perfectly. The restlessness of being in class. I feel the same way. I've skipped too many classes.
7/13/2011 c20 
228punctured.lungs
i love this. a lot. i feel like it was written about me... "i fear being vulnerable..." i love that stanza. as well as the one after it. and, well, the whole hting. "i do not understand why sometimes i want to sob and scream and rip holes in my skin, i do not know why it makes me love myself." i've been trying to find those words for years. thanks for writing this.
228punctured.lungsi love this. a lot. i feel like it was written about me... "i fear being vulnerable..." i love that stanza. as well as the one after it. and, well, the whole hting. "i do not understand why sometimes i want to sob and scream and rip holes in my skin, i do not know why it makes me love myself." i've been trying to find those words for years. thanks for writing this.
7/13/2011 c5 punctured.lungs
i LOVE the first stanza. completely. the third one as well, but the first is my favorite.
i LOVE the first stanza. completely. the third one as well, but the first is my favorite.
7/13/2011 c25 2doe heart
you receive a medal for making it through high school. not even kidding.
i hope you find the confidence to write again because you have a style with such integrity and flow that i can't get enough of it. but i've been losing it too. it's a bad thing.
2doe heartyou receive a medal for making it through high school. not even kidding.
i hope you find the confidence to write again because you have a style with such integrity and flow that i can't get enough of it. but i've been losing it too. it's a bad thing.
2/26/2011 c13 90metal butterfly
I enjoy the dark humour in the final stanza a lot. You are an exceptional writer.
90metal butterflyI enjoy the dark humour in the final stanza a lot. You are an exceptional writer.
1/19/2011 c24 31drink me pretty
it's hard to adjust to a new life of "well-being",
especially when all you've ever known was malfunction.
it takes time.
such a lovely web of words, you weave;
tangling around and around a most delicate
sensibility-if that makes any sense.
despite having difficulties writing, i'm glad
you were able to conjure this.
31drink me prettyit's hard to adjust to a new life of "well-being",
especially when all you've ever known was malfunction.
it takes time.
such a lovely web of words, you weave;
tangling around and around a most delicate
sensibility-if that makes any sense.
despite having difficulties writing, i'm glad
you were able to conjure this.
10/17/2010 c23 drink me pretty
i'll admit, i've wanted to experience hallucinations before. only because i felt insane enough already, but still so wretchedly attached to reality-i figured if i was going to feel this crazy, i might as well have believed/seen crazy things, too. idk. i got over it though.
you should see a psychiatrist, if you haven't already. get yourself on some meds to help. tis all i can suggest, unfortunately.
still, i love this; love it to tragic, broken bits. your writing has always had that otherworldly feel to it, and now i know why. still i wish you the best.
i'll admit, i've wanted to experience hallucinations before. only because i felt insane enough already, but still so wretchedly attached to reality-i figured if i was going to feel this crazy, i might as well have believed/seen crazy things, too. idk. i got over it though.
you should see a psychiatrist, if you haven't already. get yourself on some meds to help. tis all i can suggest, unfortunately.
still, i love this; love it to tragic, broken bits. your writing has always had that otherworldly feel to it, and now i know why. still i wish you the best.
6/18/2010 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
As grotesque and self-loathing as this is, I find the image strangely happy, and maybe that's just because you used the word happy. Meh. I like it. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesAs grotesque and self-loathing as this is, I find the image strangely happy, and maybe that's just because you used the word happy. Meh. I like it. Keep writing! :)
1/31/2010 c19 32she left ringing in his head
in ways, i can relate to so much of this, understand where you're coming from.
32she left ringing in his headin ways, i can relate to so much of this, understand where you're coming from.
1/9/2010 c18 31drink me pretty
intense. raw. conflicting. beautiful.
this is emotion, and romantic writing,
at its very best.
i hope you figure things out.
31drink me prettyintense. raw. conflicting. beautiful.
this is emotion, and romantic writing,
at its very best.
i hope you figure things out.