for dumpster11/23/2009 c10 speakeasy-love
I absolutely love this chapter! its so honest and…well I’ve always loved reading poems that sound as though they were written at a school lunch table. hah.
I absolutely love this chapter! its so honest and…well I’ve always loved reading poems that sound as though they were written at a school lunch table. hah.
11/1/2009 c12 
54wayfaringstrangers
haha, i love finding money in my bra. xD
(especially when i don't remember putting it there.)
54wayfaringstrangershaha, i love finding money in my bra. xD
(especially when i don't remember putting it there.)
8/12/2009 c2 173Little girl Big world
"his hands jit-
ter against her skin, leather
on lace,"
-Love these lines.
Great job!
173Little girl Big world"his hands jit-
ter against her skin, leather
on lace,"
-Love these lines.
Great job!
8/5/2009 c1 my hips are scarred
every day is a struggle, isn't it?
it is for me.
beautiful poetry - i've read all eight chapters.
you certainly have a gift for words.
you are a beautiful person.
please believe it.
every day is a struggle, isn't it?
it is for me.
beautiful poetry - i've read all eight chapters.
you certainly have a gift for words.
you are a beautiful person.
please believe it.
7/15/2009 c4 145young and the reckless
the snarky, annoyed attitude is very evident and desired.
and i like the phrase, "my bestfriend is an eating disorder"
because it's like we're skipping the trivial facts
and just getting down to the cold hard truth. very nice :)
145young and the recklessthe snarky, annoyed attitude is very evident and desired.
and i like the phrase, "my bestfriend is an eating disorder"
because it's like we're skipping the trivial facts
and just getting down to the cold hard truth. very nice :)
7/7/2009 c3 young and the reckless
this is what i call quiltwork poetry.
little bits and pieces of personal lives
stitched together to create something
comforting and warm and beautiful.
i liked it.
this is what i call quiltwork poetry.
little bits and pieces of personal lives
stitched together to create something
comforting and warm and beautiful.
i liked it.
7/1/2009 c3 Spare Change
that was amazing. i like the simplicity of the first part of the series. when you started putting faces and characters in it, it suddenly got so intense. the human struggles were very dramatic, but the mundane backdrop made it seem so real, so sadly commonplace.
i also like how weird the titles are for each piece. they add mystery to the whole thing :D
that was amazing. i like the simplicity of the first part of the series. when you started putting faces and characters in it, it suddenly got so intense. the human struggles were very dramatic, but the mundane backdrop made it seem so real, so sadly commonplace.
i also like how weird the titles are for each piece. they add mystery to the whole thing :D