for Waterfall4/23/2021 c1 santosjudy437
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Not to be overreacting but you're book is totally awesome. You're innate writing skill is what the world should witness. Try joining NovelStar's writing competition because why not? Here's the link if you want to.
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2/15/2016 c6 A
My apologies for leaving this under an anonymous review, but I unfortunately do not have an account here on FP, and so this is the best I can do. I have to admit that I've read this story before, but no matter how many times I read it, its charms never fail to win me over. This is most certainly my favorite story to sit down and read over a cup of hot cocoa, dreaming of the Wild West and the gunslinger. Thank you so much for posting; I enjoy it a little more every time.
My apologies for leaving this under an anonymous review, but I unfortunately do not have an account here on FP, and so this is the best I can do. I have to admit that I've read this story before, but no matter how many times I read it, its charms never fail to win me over. This is most certainly my favorite story to sit down and read over a cup of hot cocoa, dreaming of the Wild West and the gunslinger. Thank you so much for posting; I enjoy it a little more every time.
8/17/2015 c6 klu1
This was a very fun short story.
I will admit, though that I'd forgotten the part of your note at the beginning about this being 'fun' ... Because as Delilah was telling Pure 'Just go ahead, kill me.' I was thinking 'Oh crap this is going to be one of those things where she gets stabbed, then Jonas comes in and she see's he's alive only long enough to see him kill Pure then give her a first-and-last kiss.'
Even after that didn't play out, I was honestly thinking that there could be a twist un-happy ending, right up to the moment they rode off on the horse...
So maybe I'm just a cynic, but I'll prefer to think that you did a good job of suspense ay the end there.
Thanks for writing.
This was a very fun short story.
I will admit, though that I'd forgotten the part of your note at the beginning about this being 'fun' ... Because as Delilah was telling Pure 'Just go ahead, kill me.' I was thinking 'Oh crap this is going to be one of those things where she gets stabbed, then Jonas comes in and she see's he's alive only long enough to see him kill Pure then give her a first-and-last kiss.'
Even after that didn't play out, I was honestly thinking that there could be a twist un-happy ending, right up to the moment they rode off on the horse...
So maybe I'm just a cynic, but I'll prefer to think that you did a good job of suspense ay the end there.
Thanks for writing.
8/14/2014 c6 EmeraldHope
I have been looking for a great Western! I found it!
I have been looking for a great Western! I found it!
9/19/2012 c6 Handmaiden of Artemis
Oh my gosh, if I could write something like this in two and half days I would be a happy camper! So cute, so fun. Love it!
Oh my gosh, if I could write something like this in two and half days I would be a happy camper! So cute, so fun. Love it!
3/21/2011 c6 misssweetsweet
Short, sweet, and delightful. I enjoyed this story and count it among one of the better western stories I've come across.
Short, sweet, and delightful. I enjoyed this story and count it among one of the better western stories I've come across.
1/26/2011 c6 AmyBabe
Hey, I loved this. Yes it was predictable in parts but it wasn't bad at all. Also, I thought it was well written and better than most of the stuff on here. I really enjoyed reading it. The kind of story which you want now and again. Lighthearted, not too deep but entertaining. Thanks, Amy
Hey, I loved this. Yes it was predictable in parts but it wasn't bad at all. Also, I thought it was well written and better than most of the stuff on here. I really enjoyed reading it. The kind of story which you want now and again. Lighthearted, not too deep but entertaining. Thanks, Amy
12/1/2010 c6 
1mpookiew
So good! I think you are such a talented writer and I really enjoy your stories.
1mpookiewSo good! I think you are such a talented writer and I really enjoy your stories.
11/20/2010 c6 3LanternLight13
It was short, but that didn't lessen it at all. Very well writen. Thanks for sharing.
3LanternLight13It was short, but that didn't lessen it at all. Very well writen. Thanks for sharing.
10/27/2010 c6 XpheonixrisingX
Ah! I freaking LOVE this story! I was so giddy the whole time, my cheeks hurt from smiling. Great job! :D
Ah! I freaking LOVE this story! I was so giddy the whole time, my cheeks hurt from smiling. Great job! :D
7/27/2010 c6 forgetmenotbutterfly
Wow. This was really fun to read, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you! :D
Wow. This was really fun to read, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you! :D
6/20/2010 c6 tamii
I don't think this was cliche or predictable at all! I mean, some aspects of it were but overall I thought it was a really great read. I feel as though Delilah's fears were justified and I'm glad that despite her background, she was given a second chance. I'm really glad I read this :)
I don't think this was cliche or predictable at all! I mean, some aspects of it were but overall I thought it was a really great read. I feel as though Delilah's fears were justified and I'm glad that despite her background, she was given a second chance. I'm really glad I read this :)