for Introduction to Butterflies3/18/2011 c1 
5thefaultinourpatronus
Clint! :D Cool introduction to him. Very cool beginning, so dramatic! Typically best friend behavior - in that sense it started off as a realistic story. I also like how you tore away from cliche and stereotypes by describing the narrator as a hot blonde. That character is usually the best friends... Unfortunately I'm guilty of that crime XD
Clint may have had the softest hair and prettiest eyes...
-I actually think you could use some better describing words here. I mean, it actually sounds pretty immature. Then again, they're fourteen. I remember acting that crazy as a fourteen year old XD anyway overall pretty good chapter! (:
x mandy
~review marathon, link in my profile
5thefaultinourpatronusClint! :D Cool introduction to him. Very cool beginning, so dramatic! Typically best friend behavior - in that sense it started off as a realistic story. I also like how you tore away from cliche and stereotypes by describing the narrator as a hot blonde. That character is usually the best friends... Unfortunately I'm guilty of that crime XD
Clint may have had the softest hair and prettiest eyes...
-I actually think you could use some better describing words here. I mean, it actually sounds pretty immature. Then again, they're fourteen. I remember acting that crazy as a fourteen year old XD anyway overall pretty good chapter! (:
x mandy
~review marathon, link in my profile
10/1/2010 c13 Anon
I'm not doing this review to be rude, I just can't spend a lot of time on FP anymore so I'm going to tell you the probable story line briefly which is also what I want to happen xD
Big plan = KABOM! Cause instead of falling in love FINALLY with Clint she also finds put the true douche form of...Andy...or is it Adam? =O But yeah, one of his doucheiness being he won't let Clint write anymore songs for the band and took credit for the Butterflies song.
Something happens here something there maybe Alec and Marvin get together (yaoi fangirl coming out here xD)
AND FINALLY CLINT AND ASH END UP TOGETHER EVEN THOUGH SHES A BITCH! ^^
(I mean I get the situation she's in but she has no right to be angry..)
Team Clint xD
I'm not doing this review to be rude, I just can't spend a lot of time on FP anymore so I'm going to tell you the probable story line briefly which is also what I want to happen xD
Big plan = KABOM! Cause instead of falling in love FINALLY with Clint she also finds put the true douche form of...Andy...or is it Adam? =O But yeah, one of his doucheiness being he won't let Clint write anymore songs for the band and took credit for the Butterflies song.
Something happens here something there maybe Alec and Marvin get together (yaoi fangirl coming out here xD)
AND FINALLY CLINT AND ASH END UP TOGETHER EVEN THOUGH SHES A BITCH! ^^
(I mean I get the situation she's in but she has no right to be angry..)
Team Clint xD
9/12/2010 c13 7MyFairytaleEnding
Meh, I actually like this how it is, I'd prefer if you didn't change it. But if that's what it take to get another chapter written well then okay :) Can't wait to read whatever comes next
7MyFairytaleEndingMeh, I actually like this how it is, I'd prefer if you didn't change it. But if that's what it take to get another chapter written well then okay :) Can't wait to read whatever comes next
9/7/2010 c1 10nangelique
aww.. this is really good. a bit heeartbreaking already. i'm goingto continue reading now. :))
10nangeliqueaww.. this is really good. a bit heeartbreaking already. i'm goingto continue reading now. :))
7/2/2010 c11 Red Bat
Aw cute!
Aw cute!
7/2/2010 c7 Red Bat
lolz I love that song! and this chapter xD
lolz I love that song! and this chapter xD
7/2/2010 c3 Redbat
OMFG! lolz I was laughin my head off at the part with Marvin sleepin n all xD Awesome story!
OMFG! lolz I was laughin my head off at the part with Marvin sleepin n all xD Awesome story!
6/16/2010 c12 9Brolinshipper
I love this story, please update, cus its been a REALLY long time, lol. Even if i did just finish, i saw the thingamajig said updated: 2-26-10, haha. So yeah, i love it!
9BrolinshipperI love this story, please update, cus its been a REALLY long time, lol. Even if i did just finish, i saw the thingamajig said updated: 2-26-10, haha. So yeah, i love it!
2/28/2010 c12 2righthere431
Aw they're such cute dorks with each other! I want to know Greg's plan even though it's probably stupid and not gonna work lol.
2righthere431Aw they're such cute dorks with each other! I want to know Greg's plan even though it's probably stupid and not gonna work lol.
2/21/2010 c11 LogInGirl
WHERE ARE YOU ?
UPDATE.
BEEN LIKE AMONTH
- LogInGirl
WHERE ARE YOU ?
UPDATE.
BEEN LIKE AMONTH
- LogInGirl