for Matched5/24/2015 c1 Guest
i think this is the best oneshot ive ever seen.
i think this is the best oneshot ive ever seen.
3/17/2015 c1 
1rAiNwAtEr1
Beautiful, would have loved to have read this as a multi chapter story but it was brilliant all the same.
1rAiNwAtEr1Beautiful, would have loved to have read this as a multi chapter story but it was brilliant all the same.
2/20/2015 c1 Moka-girl
The ending was a bit rushed, but I liked the story and the idea behind it.
The ending was a bit rushed, but I liked the story and the idea behind it.
11/15/2014 c1 Guest
LOL THAT ENDING THO
creeepy xD
LOL THAT ENDING THO
creeepy xD
11/14/2014 c1 Fangirl No Name
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe
7/27/2014 c1 6Starlite Nightfall
I absolutely hate oneshots, but the concept of this was too fascinating and I had to give it a read. I loved this so much! I'm so sad there wasn't more to it, but I guess when you know, you know! Very well written and I loved every moment of it. Favoriting!
6Starlite NightfallI absolutely hate oneshots, but the concept of this was too fascinating and I had to give it a read. I loved this so much! I'm so sad there wasn't more to it, but I guess when you know, you know! Very well written and I loved every moment of it. Favoriting!
4/18/2014 c1 4rockspapersnscissors
OMG-! I LOVED this-! It was well put together, original, and very entertaining to read-!
My only problem is the only gay couple in sixty years bit... that seems unrealistic, even in unsavory societies there is -in a minority standpoint- thriving numbers of homosexual citizens-!
I think the story would have been better if homosexual couples -tho sporadic- were accepted in the general view point of the futurist society you made...
So the strife of their relationship wouldn't have been the rarity, but Indigo's coming to terms with his matched homosexual partner Aleck; sorta a forced full cohesion of the two-!
Imagine walking in there straight, wondering about the woman your going to be matched with, the future the two of you will have, the children ya'll would procreate into the world... only to be matched with a homosexual man and forced to live in government subsidized housing with him because the two were automatically considered a legal match by the gov. when they received the test results-!
O.o ... I kinda went with that didn't I? Sorry about the tangent :7
Anyway, I loved it, in my book it was definitely a 9/10-!
-RPS
4rockspapersnscissorsOMG-! I LOVED this-! It was well put together, original, and very entertaining to read-!
My only problem is the only gay couple in sixty years bit... that seems unrealistic, even in unsavory societies there is -in a minority standpoint- thriving numbers of homosexual citizens-!
I think the story would have been better if homosexual couples -tho sporadic- were accepted in the general view point of the futurist society you made...
So the strife of their relationship wouldn't have been the rarity, but Indigo's coming to terms with his matched homosexual partner Aleck; sorta a forced full cohesion of the two-!
Imagine walking in there straight, wondering about the woman your going to be matched with, the future the two of you will have, the children ya'll would procreate into the world... only to be matched with a homosexual man and forced to live in government subsidized housing with him because the two were automatically considered a legal match by the gov. when they received the test results-!
O.o ... I kinda went with that didn't I? Sorry about the tangent :7
Anyway, I loved it, in my book it was definitely a 9/10-!
-RPS
3/20/2014 c1 Atomic Works
Great story, it was amusing to read about so many people putting some much faith into a computer but then doubting it when they were unhappy with the computer's outcome.
Although I am curious what the two boy's family had to say about their match.
Hopefully only good things if not then they can take it up with the computer.
Great story, it was amusing to read about so many people putting some much faith into a computer but then doubting it when they were unhappy with the computer's outcome.
Although I am curious what the two boy's family had to say about their match.
Hopefully only good things if not then they can take it up with the computer.
9/8/2013 c1 2GerardtheMoose
That was a lovely story! I really liked the concept and where you took it :)
2GerardtheMooseThat was a lovely story! I really liked the concept and where you took it :)
9/1/2013 c1 polar.amity
AWWWWW
Sweet, cute, different, sexy, easy, funny, PERFECT!
Thank you :)
AWWWWW
Sweet, cute, different, sexy, easy, funny, PERFECT!
Thank you :)