for Matched8/3/2009 c1 Feel The Waltz
Ahh i loved it! I reckon it could have worked as a multi-chaptered story too. Thank you for posting. :)
Ahh i loved it! I reckon it could have worked as a multi-chaptered story too. Thank you for posting. :)
7/6/2009 c1 Le1chi
WOW! I wish we had a supercomputer like that in real life! It would be so much easier lol
WOW! I wish we had a supercomputer like that in real life! It would be so much easier lol
7/5/2009 c1 Berrin
I enjoyed this immensely. Cute characters, nice plot, and I just loved the last two lines.
I enjoyed this immensely. Cute characters, nice plot, and I just loved the last two lines.
7/5/2009 c1 L
This was amazing.
Loved it so much!
This was amazing.
Loved it so much!
7/4/2009 c1 
54big.break.and.laryngitis
That was randomly really awesome. Like, when I read the summary, I was like, "?" but I clicked it anyways, and I'm glad I did, because it was so cool. I don't know exactly why. It's just a really great concept, I guess. They should make this into a movie, it'd be so awesome. Seriously. You should like, become best friends with someone who writes screenplays, and then they can write a pretty, pretty screenplay for you based on this, and then everyone will adore it and make it into a movie and I'd see it in theaters three times and then I'd buy it on DVD. Yeah. I say movie because I think that as far as text goes, it's perfect the way it is. Like, if you drew it out and turned it into a book, it wouldn't be as good as it is right now. But if you got your newly acquired best friend/screenplay writer, then it would make a totally awesome movie. Yeah. Maybe I'm weird, but that's just what I thought when I finished reading this- it should be a movie.
So. Good job and all. I like it.
54big.break.and.laryngitisThat was randomly really awesome. Like, when I read the summary, I was like, "?" but I clicked it anyways, and I'm glad I did, because it was so cool. I don't know exactly why. It's just a really great concept, I guess. They should make this into a movie, it'd be so awesome. Seriously. You should like, become best friends with someone who writes screenplays, and then they can write a pretty, pretty screenplay for you based on this, and then everyone will adore it and make it into a movie and I'd see it in theaters three times and then I'd buy it on DVD. Yeah. I say movie because I think that as far as text goes, it's perfect the way it is. Like, if you drew it out and turned it into a book, it wouldn't be as good as it is right now. But if you got your newly acquired best friend/screenplay writer, then it would make a totally awesome movie. Yeah. Maybe I'm weird, but that's just what I thought when I finished reading this- it should be a movie.
So. Good job and all. I like it.
7/4/2009 c1 3Daydream Nation
THAT. WAS. AMAZING.
I especially loved the last two lines about the computer, which was a brilliant way to end a story. The plot was...not totally original, but that doesn't really matter because the unique narration compensates for it. And the characters were adorable together. ;)
3Daydream NationTHAT. WAS. AMAZING.
I especially loved the last two lines about the computer, which was a brilliant way to end a story. The plot was...not totally original, but that doesn't really matter because the unique narration compensates for it. And the characters were adorable together. ;)